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Can I get some thoughts on one of my poems? That is, if anyone ever sees this...

Note: Generally my poems are not capitalized, because I'm too lazy, and I think it looks smaller. I like small things,
for no particular reason. Also, lower case letters seem... I'm not sure... I just like their shape better. If you are
against this - ever heard of e.e. cummings?

of insanity & poetic hallucinations

my insanity is the best hideaway,
the only safe place
in a world intent on eating itself.

when they hold their torches to my hands
so I cannot write, cannot think
for the pain,
I escape in illusions,
poetic hallucinations.

in my dementia,
there is the make-believe,
things we poets like to write of.
they are layered with candyfloss hope,
and something else -
when you care too much about somebody...

I think it's called love?
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  owlish — Page created: 22 April 2009
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hannahboo says:   22 April 2009   523775  
i'm the first comment ^_^
its great
Larksong says:   22 April 2009   482433  
Wow. THis poem is deeply laced with thought, and really is a wonderful piece that
takes reading multiple times to completely understand the whole meaning. That's how
deep it is. Good job! ^^
Anime_Addicted says:   22 April 2009   515657  
all I can say is.. wow :o
‹Ninja.Pocky(っ>ω<)っ› says :   24 April 2009   435333  
Even though i dont understand it, I think its really deep....

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