looks good but i think you should do what you said to sticky.
take hints of what you like of stickyrice's style and add your own
thing into it.
don't copy completely because that's just no good!
it's okay to get inspired but you don't want to completely take
someone else style. it may flattered the artist highly though. 8D
think of it this way; to have your own unique style is harder than
taking someone elses and in the end will get you the most respect!
and you're still young
or at least i assume you're young
so YOU GOT TIME TO FIGURE THIS OUT<3