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Knight Of Sorrow
Uploaded: 27 December 2008
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Crimson draining from these veins
My life not worth taking ,
What have you gained
As You glare into my eyes
In your hand the knife lies
My torture, your sinister devise
You take my life, its my demise
Cutting deeper to my soul
Nearby awaits a shallow hole
As Your deadly love takes its toll
It soon becomes clear, and now I know
Your love was never truly real
You had me believe it was sincere
My trust in you, shattered like glass
As you hold me down I gasp
Breathing in, trying to escape
Your hate so pure, I feel so raped
Dying in your hands so cold
Choke me as I turn to stone
Pouring my blood on your soul
No guilt of losing control
Beating me with all your love
My mortal life is set free like a dove
So I thank you for killing me
And taking away every reason for living
For if it wasn't for your bitter affection
I would have never felt rejection
So take my heart as a simple gift
A reminder of our love that went adrift
And kiss my cold dead lips goodbye
And leave me lying here to die

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Drago says:   27 December 2008   821938  
Its awesome.
TwistedxMind says:   27 December 2008   384697  
omg, your poem was amazing and deep, I loved it! And your drawing is
‹God of the new world› says:   27 December 2008   917148  
that it freaken great
‹♠♫ßιρσlαя•έυρнσяια♪♠› says:   27 December 2008   752595  
oooh, nice. :]
mizty2 says:   28 December 2008   279845  
 i luv it *kidnaps*
‹+ThErapY-haZArarD+› says:   28 December 2008   958449  
wowowowow thats amazig kidnaps
‹LoveIsDeadInHerEyes› says:   31 December 2008   252258  
thats..beautiful =]
junegirl22 says:   31 December 2008   456211  
eep... eep... AHHHHHHWAAAHHHH!! *Stops crying* ez so BEAUTIFULL!
*Kidnaps* eep... eep!
‹MichelleMuffinPants.♥› says:   31 December 2008   837887  
I love it.
Its so strong.
Kirti says:   31 December 2008   739985  
this is on the popular list!
‹♥ =]koalas_4_eva[=♥› says:   1 January 2009   711148  
omg so kewl
hehehe lolz *kidnaps*
‹█bLaZiNg☺DuCk☺fAcE☺DaRyN█› says:   1 January 2009   838194  
MeepingMeep says:   2 May 2009   154519  
The poem.... Speechless.... (inside thoughts*Perfect timing....
sigh*) It's.... unexplainable. It reaches into the heart and finds a
soft spot. The drawing is an enhancement to the poem and both deserve
good praise.
Photo says:   7 May 2009   712676  
<3 cutw
‹SkidRow~♥› says :   17 June 2009   641129  
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