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Uploaded: 27 December 2007
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I absolutely hate how this turned out.

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‹*Expired*› says:   27 December 2007   253812  
this is really good!
‹► Asim ◄› says:   27 December 2007   469825  
that is fantastic
NeonStars says:   27 December 2007   933843  
Crits? I'm not very experienced so that's hard... :/
I can't really come up with any, I think the oekakis fine.
dylaneats says:   27 December 2007   424682  
this suks relly bad not just kiding
meowzaa says:   27 December 2007   775391  
zomg this is gorgeousss.
theres nothing that is bad about thiss, man. 
i wish i could do stuff like this, but i suck when it comes to
watercolor and pen. 
SithWedgie says:   27 December 2007   825799  
:/ all I have to say is good stuff.
‹MayaLOVESFAME› says:   27 December 2007   923851  
loxx says:   27 December 2007   546629  
i this this is great.
the only crit i can give you really is to try and change the way the
hair moves because it looks a little unnatural.
thats kindof a shady critic in itself just because all anime/manga
hair usually doesnt look all that natural.
overall i love it. O_O
julygal1998 says:   27 December 2007   959133  
Wow, that's AMAZING i love it!!!!!!!!!!
‹Still wanna talk? Add KrissieKaboom :]› says:   27 December 2007   787335  
it's purty. :3
lol you did a great job ^_____^
Mizu_Tsuki says:   27 December 2007   844955  
That's.... AMAZINGGGG!
yuna1313 says:   27 December 2007   149598  
sweet that is allmost like my name
haku12 says:   27 December 2007   155739  
very interesting ^^ first of all, i love the background and her
expression. the shading is also very good, a very warm piece.  the
hairs motion is what someone looking at the peice will notice because
its not a warm color. the way you highlighted it is very nice, *CRIT*
but parts of it look neglected because that spot its one shade. the
wavyness adds to the mystical part of the peice, but *CRIT* the 2
waves on her clothes are kinda unnatural. i really hope thats not too
much, i feel like my inner criter is taking over o_o
‹ϟ Kara-saur ϟ› says:   27 December 2007   336218  
Oooh o.0 ish beauuutifulll~!!
‹< BoulevardOfKittyDreams >› says:   27 December 2007   312537  
This beautiful! Do you have a tablet??? :D
‹LoveIsDeadInHerEyes› says:   27 December 2007   537978  
its looks pretty and stuffz
she looks like a goddess
Kushina says:   27 December 2007   682441  
I just got one~
TheMokey shouts:   27 December 2007   949628  
holly *beep*
its great!
myra101 says:   27 December 2007   399649  
Kat3384 says:   28 December 2007   431544  
This is so amazing.

It looks great!

The background, the hair, all of it looks soo....pretty.
classe_e_le_yuyu says:   29 December 2007   724871  
>( you make me jealous!!!
chikapollo says:   30 December 2007   735678  
I love her hair <3
‹Lora Patsy Poodle› says:   30 December 2007   198231  
I don't see how people can crit it...
Gosh I need more expirience ;____;
(I just forgot how to spell that.... so SP??)

+Is squished by Jealous Green Giant+
MitsukiWolf says:   30 December 2007   522455  
I luv this..
I don't see how u dont like it.
I think it's beautiful and aawshum!
It's so pretty..very nice work u did here
Kittenluver73 says:   30 December 2007   344751  
I think that you should make the hair more seperate, because hair
isn't one piece. it's thousands.

but anyways, that's my critique. 

otherwise i think its beautiful.
Taku says:   30 December 2007   321538  
ummm i think it worked out fine but if u want crit than here:
hair just the hair and the rest of the oekaki is great
karkar22 says:   30 December 2007   963692  
Soflball_Queen says:   30 December 2007   922452  
whats so wrong about it
i think is's awsome
cloud_ninja_princess101 says:   31 December 2007   244816  
This is very beautiful.
spoilbaby says:   31 December 2007   929419  
Tobey_cat says:   31 December 2007   839134  
wolfgirl2_0 says:   31 December 2007   384671  
That's beautiful.... Crits... uh..... Not good at those! xD I'll get
back to you on that.
mewmewkameko says:   1 January 2008   884728  
So pretty!
I'm going to...erm...kidnap it! Is that the word?
BioGirl says:   1 January 2008   117872  
its awesome way better than what i could do
naruto_lvr says:   6 January 2008   573929  
yay its luna!it very pretty!
angelfreak10 says:   6 January 2008   378237  
thats so so so beautiful i just love all your drawings!! ^^
madiexmizuki says:   27 May 2008   338398  
I think its pritty and the colors are amazimg.
Brooke_CoolKid says:   17 August 2008   188739  
This ish sooo pretty.

risk says :   18 November 2010   908013  
What do you like about this oekaki? What can be improved?
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