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hey its a dramatic story isnt it

Once there was this gal named Nora and her parents were dead. She was always disstressed .Then this kid came named
Jesse her parents died from getting hit by a drunk driver. They realized they had alot in commen. At school they hung
out. At recess they did everything together. Then they both decieded that they would find out their parents names and
what they looked like .When they found their parents names Noras parents names were Bonnie and Keith Kinderland then
they found Jesses parents names they were..............................Bonnie and Keith Kinderland they were sisters !
What a joy to find real family members !!!!! They very very very excited!!!

THE END  write how my story is please i want to know how to make it better i do really want your opions !!!!!!
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my_username_rocks says:   4 April 2007   626819  
come and be the first to sign

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pablo_cow says:   4 April 2007   147532  
ok why did u make a page insted of a diery entry
my_username_rocks says:   4 April 2007   825169  
i dont know i thought mor people would visit it this way
I_wonder_Y says:   4 April 2007   678168  
wow. that's cool! Lol.
sarbear says:   5 April 2007   772879  
put some periods in. its a big run on sentence. but a great story with some. s
cutie_kat says:   5 April 2007   628865  
wow it's nice but it has NOOOO detail whatsoever
Kikikay says:   5 April 2007   733565  
the first 2 peeps were right but great story!
my_username_rocks says:   5 April 2007   433617  
guys i am not a perfosonal writer ok
my_username_rocks says:   5 April 2007   335796  
visit my other kupi page the one thats says i wanna be a fashion desiner so give me
some ideas
sarbear says:   5 April 2007   985872  
i was tryin to help sorrrrry
sarbear says:   5 April 2007   772677  
good job wit the peridos
Moey says:   5 April 2007   173692  
my_username_rocks says:   5 April 2007   487259  
guess what guys i will not change it to your satisfaction so stop bothering
Sailor_Mercury says:   5 April 2007   633567  
i know i'm just saying, it would be better. I love the plot. Ima write a book about
that subject and sell it ^^ with periods and details so mines will be better :D
Sailor_Mercury says:   5 April 2007   913439  
but i like ur story ^^
my_username_rocks says:   5 April 2007   379419  
sorry sailor may subjet my story you DO NOT HAVE THE PERMISSION TO DO
Sailor_Mercury says:   5 April 2007   955968  
OK fthen u have been stealing EVERYONES ideas becuz ALOT of ppl write about two ppl
finding out there twinz...i can do the same, i have rights O.o
my_username_rocks says:   6 April 2007   671264  
well i did not know ppl wrote i did not copy like you are about to do i thought this
was my own idea i did not know theat ppl have already wrote about that subject
my_username_rocks says:   16 April 2007   135588  
well just poop me away
Sydalicous11 says :   20 April 2007   334272  
LEAVE HER ALONE she was just trying to make a nice little story and all you do is
ruin it all of you need to just go away and leave her alone
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