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Rave The Demon Slayer

This is a story I made and I thought it would be a hit
so I hope u guys like it

Once upon a time a young 21 year old man with short brown hair and gleaming brown eyes, was walking through town on a
sunny morning. His name was Rave. He was wearing old tathered clothing. A brown cloth-like pants and a white cotton
shirt. He went to the store because at home he was out of milk. At home he lives with his mom and younger sister. So on
the way to the store he says hi as he passes the villagers. Just before he entered the store he noticed beside him, a
pile of leaves that shined like a small gleam of light from the heavens. So out of curiosity, he turned around to see
what it was. As he reached for the small object, he thought of what the object would be. Maybe its a shiny stone or
perhaps a piece of glass. Then as he touched it he fainted..

	As he awoke, he noticed that he was in different clothing. Like some kind of armor. He also noticed the he was in a
different place, sort of like a new World. There were creatures flying around him in the sky and monsters everywhere,
like none has he ever seen in his entire life. As he was looking around he noticed that it looked familiar. It was an
exact replica of his village! Other than that there were people just like him, looking at him strangely, perhaps because
he was lying on the ground in a suit of armor. He went to the nearest person and look at him with a shocked look. The
person was dead! But they seems like they were still alive, walking and talking among the dead! 

	He backed away and tripped on something. He got up and he saw that he tripped on a sword. He picked up the sword and
realizes that the sword was light as a feather. Then, he remembered that the sword was probably the gleaming object that
he saw in a pile of leaves. He puts it away it the sheath that he had around his waist. He looked around in a confused
way, like the dead-looking villagers dont notice, or they dont even care that there are monsters around them. 

	Next, he remembered about his home, and his family. His family could get hurt or killed by these monsters roaming
around freely. So without further ado, he sprinted to his house like a speeding bullet.

	As he got to the front of the house he noticed that the houses windows were broken and the door was torn off. He ran
into the house and called for his mother and sister, but no one answered. Then, out of nowhere, he heard a frightening
sound from the upstairs bedroom. It was like a screeching sound from nothing hes ever heard in his entire life. The
sound couldve been some sort of creature; or one of the monsters. He ran upstairs and tried to figure out which room
the noise cam from.

	The screeching came again, but this time, it wasnt a monstrous scream. It sounded like a woman screaming. It sounded
like his mother. The scream came from his mothers room. He ran into the room and saw a gruesome sight. In that very
room, he saw lying there on the floor, was his own mother, drenched in blood and flesh from her own body. Her stomach
was ripped opened and she had no limbs. 

	Then, he saw this shadowy creature in the corner, doing something quite strange. As he walked closer to the shadowed
creature he heard a crunching noise; like it was eating something. He crept closer and closer more slowly with every
step. The monster was eating something alright. He can see the arm dangling from its mouth as it turned his head.

	At first he thought it was some kind of animal of some sort. But he saw it. It wasnt an animal, it was his sister! The
monster was munching on his sisters limb. The limb was almost entirely in its mouth. At the top of his lungs he
screamed, "YOU MONSTER!! He lunged at the monster, with the sword in his hands, gripped tightly, and slashed down right
into the monster head. He had swung the sword as hard as he could, straight down into the monsters skull.

	He then continuously slashed the monster until there was nothing left of it but only the blood and remains of his body.
He swore to himself that hell find a way to get rid of all these monsters from this world so he may return to his own.
Hell stop any monster and anyone who stand in his way of his goal. So with his last breath, he raises the sword and
points it toward the sky as he yells, I WILL AVENGE YOU MY FAMILY. EVEN IF ITS THE LAST THING I DO!!!

	Then, he jumps out of the house from the window and lands without a sound

To Be Continued.
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Lover_Overeasy says:   23 June 2008   564476  
...hmm interesting..
‹♪Jaydee.Got.Cookies♪› says:   23 June 2008   252567  
yea.....u like it....?
‹>FineOMine<› says:   23 June 2008   446215  
wow thats a very good story...^-^
‹♪Jaydee.Got.Cookies♪› says:   23 June 2008   551824  
Princess67 says:   21 July 2008   616796  
that was an awesome story!!
‹♪Jaydee.Got.Cookies♪› says :   22 July 2008   719446  
u like it?
plz tell everyone about this
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