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My story

This is an excerpt of my story Bad Things Happen:
          Kira sat alone in the dull, dark room. She could hear her mothers fotsteps coming
down the hallway. The door creaked open behind her and filled the dusty room with a
fuzzy gray light. Her mother sat down beside her on the metal frame bed. It creaked
under the weight of the two. Kira turned to face her mother and saw that she had
been crying. Her eyes were puffed and red but she still had the beauty which Kira
lacked. Her mother sniffled, then said " Honey, I do not wish to tell you but I
must. I will just say it and stop acting so foolish. Your father is leaving!" Kira
looked into her mother's gray blue eyes and felt one stinging tear run down her
face. She stood up and wiped the tear. She silently swept out of the room, her silky
black dress flowing like water behind her.

I hope you like it!! Tell me what u think below
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  kro3291 — Page created: 3 March 2007  |  Last modified: 22 March 2007
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candy11 says:   3 March 2007   651527  
cool story bit. i'd like to hear the rest.
kagra says:   5 March 2007   647538  
good story wat happens next?
kro3291 says:   6 March 2007   614748  
its a custody battle between her parents and then she's dealing with the problems of
teenage life and then in the end, she runs away and finds a better place in life.
mew_berry_san says:   8 March 2007   497613  
I like it!
kaitlynn says:   8 March 2007   196343  
write more more more
kro3291 says:   8 March 2007   937413  
thanx 2 both of u! i will add more sumtime soon
katiedawg writes:   10 March 2007   641997  
hi i like your story
kro3291 says :   10 March 2007   662885  
thanx katie!!
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