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doubt [a poem i wrote]

i wrote this for some stupid language arts project.
there are three others too in different pages so check back later for those.
the reason im even posting them is because they got nominated for a nationwide contest.

this one is called

doubt.

Holding on, Holding on, Letting go again.
Giving up, Giving up, When you think you’re at your end.
Living is a purpose,
Loving is a laughing matter,
Laughter is a love,
You find your heart shattered.
Broken into little pieces metaphorically speaking,
Feeling like you’ll never find the love your truly seeking.
Holding on, Holding on, Letting go again.
Giving up, Giving up, When you think you’re at your end.
Pitying yourself when all else fails,
Seems as though you’ve chosen the wrong trail.
You can’t go back,
You can’t change things,
You must live on,
And find your wings.
Holding on, Holding on, Letting go again.
Giving up, Giving up, When you think you’re at your end.
Touch the sky,
Jump and fly,
Soar away to what’s in store,
Hope you find what your looking for until we meet again.
Holding on, Holding on, Letting go again.
Giving up, Giving up, When you think you’re at your end.
Steering through, Steering through, What you think’s a storm. 
But, all you need, all you need is to find your hearts true form.
 
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Oroborus21 says:   27 March 2007   752782  
very nice word alliteration and repetition anchoring the emotion back to center
after each "push out".. very nice poem and so glad yu aren't afraid of the challenge
of rhyme scheme in your poems..---PERFECT just like everything you do and just like
you 
 
Hollywood says:   5 May 2007   681969  
wow, this is really good, talk about a MASTERPIECE!
kristino says:   5 May 2007   189221  
thanks.
this one actually ended up getting picked to be published out of the four ive
posted.
^_^
Hollywood says:   6 May 2007   627452  
wow, it got published!! who did it?
kristino says:   6 May 2007   871112  
yeah it did.
i wrote it and the other three in 15 minutes the nite before a poetry project [have
my semester english grade] was due.
and my teacher liked them she sent them all in and this one got picked to be
published and entered into a 3000$$ winning contest for first place.
im sure it wont win but i just thought it was exciting.
the last one i had published was in 5th grade.
that one is in a book.
^_^
Hollywood says:   8 May 2007   982638  
wow, i guess you have a nack for this thing! it is really good, congratulations!
kristino says :   8 May 2007   218161  
thanks.
^^
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