The Angel With No Halo
Gloria died 1987 December 24th A few dyas before christmas.Her parents had the
perfect gift.Though it was to late.She didnt know where she was or what to do.She was
only 10!She saw no light no way out.She went in to her parent's room watching them
cry!She had one tear in her eye.She overheard them say "That present would have set
her free!"
So she went out looking for it.She looked everywhere inside.She was panicing, wanting
to find it so badly!When she thought there was so hope she went outside and
saw a big rock, and it said "R.I.P rest in peace my believe one.Here lies Gloria her
hopes and freedom!
She dug and saw the present!She opened it and saw a glowy thing!It moved and
went above her head...then she saw the light and flew towards and now was in a better
place.
                                          THE END
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Oh!oops i didnt see the topic!-_-" I will just keep it...

Ah, well... So far nobody else entered, and this is still pretty good ^_^

dont worry, I'll change it! lol good story

Thx and yah!
xD

the theme for the story is anything..right?

There was once a girl named Samantha Edwin. She was an averege girl. She went to
school, had friends and was pretty. Her aburn hair was short and curly, most people
stopped to stare at the orange color. Though most girls are happy with a life like
hers, Samantha was not. She had everything, but Greg Thomas. A boy in her 9th grade
class that she was in love with. She had never talked to him that much, though. He
played in football games, while Samantha watched. He was in the popular crowd, while
Samantha was in the nerdy. She knew he could never feel the same way for her, so she
wanted a change.On night, she prayed to the skys "Dear God. Please, somehow make me
beautiful. Enough for Greg to scream out when he sees me. I want to be different" and
then went to sleep. During the night, she didnt notcie bright lights flashing around
her. And she didnt even notcie that she wasnt in her room anymore. That morning,
everyone was talking about the front page story on the news paper. "Girl Kidnapped
and Killed" was the headline. It defined the girl as tall, aburn haired and blue
eyes. There was a picture, saying the girls bed was splattered with blood. There was
no body, but the police knew she was dead. There was a picture on the bottom of the
collumn, and a name. Samantha Edwin was thought to be dead.

Samantha awoke in a feild. For a moment

For a moment she was confused. She looked over and saw she was sleeping just beside
a creek. When she saw her reflection, she jumped with joy. God had granted her wish!
She looked flawless, yet she still resembled herself. Her hair was now long but still
curly. Her eyes were sky blue instead of icy blue. She wore a pink dress that fit her
perfectly. She was like a Godess. She then had an idea. She said over and over in her
mind "Greg, come to the feild".  From the books she had read, she had figured out
that she was a spirit. Why else would she look so flawless and appeared in the middle
of a feild? After 20 minutes, Samantha heard footsteps. She turned to see a boy with
blond hair and hazel eyes; Greg. She smiled and said "Hey, Greg"  he turned around.
He just stared at her for a moment. Then, his eyes went wide and he started to
scream. Samantha frowned. "What is it?" she asked. Greg backed away and cried
"Y-y-you!Your the de-ead girl f-from the paper!" Samantha gasped. Dead?This isnt
possible! "Greg, no, you dont understand" she cried to him, and touched his arm. He
jumped back and yelled "Dont touch me, you, you freak!" and he ran off. Samantha
stood there, frozen. She felt tears running down from her eyes. She had gotten her
wish: Greg had screamed when he saw her. Of fear. She did something she never wanted
to happen. She caused the one she loved to hate her. She saw no meaning to live. She
hated herself.

The next morning, a body was found in a feil far north in Ontario. Samantha Edwin was
officiallt dead

Mines long too, srry!

      
Genna was a nine year old girl and addmitted she was no angel. she almost never
smiled and when she did it was only to her crush.
Tom Bark was that boy who made her smile. But he was the most spiteful kid in her
grade.
Tom and Genna started to be boyfriend and girlfriend. All the girls warned her but
she loved him! And on her 15th birthday she dumped him and that was a mistake.
She died 1/1/01 exatly on the night of her birthday. She woke in the underworlds
being fed grapes. She was the true goddess of the underworld!

sorry its not very good

thanks guys! All of your stories and dolls are awesome!!! ^_^

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              Ok my doll's name is Karen . Karen is a normal girl living in a normal
house and has normal friends. Karen likes helping others but mostly she likes to ride
her horse name

Ok my doll's name is Karen . Karen is a normal girl living in a normal house and has
normal friends. Karen likes helping others but mostly she likes to ride her horse
name Lucky Star in the wide open space , but she had a secret that nobody knows at
night she turns into a fairy helping everyone who is in danger .One day a new boy
name Adrian came to Karen's school , Karen was carrying allot of books she didn't
know where she was going , suddenly Karen bumped into the new boy Adrian all of the
books fell Karen said she was so sorry and when Karen and Adrian looked up Karen
thought it was like love at first sight. 

               Adrian couldn't take his eyes off of her and then when Karen was in
class her teacher anounced that there was a new boy which was Adrian the teacher told
Adrian to sit next to Karen because that was the only empty seat and desk in the
whole class .After school Adrian came up to Karen and asked her if she would like to
go to the dance with him  Karen said yes .
  
               Adrian was so happy that she said yes . When the night of the dance
came Adrian when and rent the most best tuxedo in the shop and Karen when and bought
the most beautiful gown in the shop when Adrian came to Karen's house he when and
knocked on the door when Karen's parents came out and told Adrian that he should
bring her back at 11 o 'clock sharp when Karen came down Adrian can't stop looking at
her Karen said 'why are you looking at me like that ?' then Adrian said ' u look very
pretty tonight ' than Karen said 'thanks' .

               When Karen and Adrian reach to the school dance everyone kept looking
at them.Karen and Adrian danced all night when Adrian when and send Karen home she
said 'walk me to the door ?' Adrian said ' sure ' when they reached the door Karen
and Adrian slowly kissed and they said goodbye.

           AND THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER 
                     THE END

you guys are doing an awesome job! we just need 4 more people and then we'll move on
to the next round!

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      THE MOST RAMDOM STORY EVER!!!!! (title-lol)
Does this girl look like she belongs there? No, not really. Dorthy woke up one
morning to find herself there, near a castle, on a yellow brick road. (sound
familiar?) When she looked around, she saw a little dog sleeping soundly at her feet.
She petted it, and it woke up, looking sleepy. "Hi dere wittle fella!" she said in a
mock-baby voice, "Where's your own-ah?" The dog looked at her, puzzled. Dorthy said,
"Well then, I'll be your owner for now, and I'll name you.... Todo." Todo looked at
her, appearently annoyed, and ran towards the castle. "Ah, well." she said to
herself. Then she heard footsteps, and singing. Dorthy looked around, and there were
three of the most random figures: a tin man, a lion, and a scarecrow. 
The tin man was smoking a steel pipe, looking as if he just stepped out of a bar. The
scarecrow was the one singing - he had a bottle of wine in one hand and a can of beer
in the other. The lion was nervously looking around the road, pecking at his braces.
"What're you guys doing here?" Dorthy asked. The three people stopped and looked at
her, as if they just noticed she was there. "Well look-ie here!!!" the scarecrow
exclaimed, "Thar's a pretty lady is arr presence!!" Then he fell unconsious, dropping
the wine and the can. "Duuuuddeee!!! Don't treat t

the can like that! For all I know, it could be my brother!!!" the tin man said. "Are
you SMOKING?" Dorthy asked, as he breathed out another whiff of it. "Pshyea! What's
it look like here! I'm smoking hay!" the tin man replied, as he took a handful of hay
from the scarecrow, stuffing it into his pipe. The scarecrow suddenly woke up and
said, "HEYYYY!!! Man, you don't know me like that!" they both laughed, and the three
of them continued their walk up to the castle.
Dorthy decided to follow them up to the castle, since she had nothing better to do
anyway. "Where are you guys going?" she asked a little while later. The three of them
looked at eachother, and suddenly sang, "WEEEEEEE'RRRRRRRRRREEEEEE off to see the
wizard! the wonderful wizard of ox! because because because because
becaaaaaaauuuuuusssssseeee!!!! because of the wonderful things he does!" and
continued their journey. Dorthy stood there, awe-strucken, taking in what she just
heard. "ooookkkkkkayyy...." she said.
They finally reached the castle, and barged into the main room, where the wizard
himself lived. THere was a big throne, facing the wall as if wanting to make a
dramatic entrance to unexpecting visitors. "Ohhhh great wizard of OX!!!" the
scarecrow said, loudly, "WE are here to SEE Youuuuuu!!!! oh great one! for....for we
need.... some stuff... from you....please." he ended, looking as if he might be
unconsious again. They all looked at the throne expentantly, but nothing moved.
"Hellooooo? Wizzy?? You there?" the tin man asked, walking up to the throne. The rest
of them walked up, too. THere was an old man, appearently asleep on his throne. "Is
he...dead?" Dorthy asked. "Poke him and you'll see." So she poked and prodded at his
elderly figure many times, harder and harder. "Excuse me, Mr. Ox? I needa get back
home, can you help me?" He suddenly awoke, and punching Dorthy in the face like a
reaction to something. "Huh? Whoos zere?" But the guys went over to Dorthy, who was
unconsious. "Dorthy! wake up man!" "Cmon! you're scaring us here!" "wake up!"
Dorthy.......Dorthy.........Dorthy........
Dorthy woke up on a hospital bed. She looked around, and saw her family all crowded
around her. "Dorthy! you're awake!" Her mother cried. "Where am I? What happened?"
she asked, feeling a lump on her head. "Oh, you got in a fight at school. You and
some kid were arguing about whether the characters in the Wizard of Oz were really
retarded drunks."her mothe

r replied. "Yeah, and everybody knows they're NOT!" her father said, laughing. And
the rest of her famile laughed, too.
WIERD....
THE END!!!!!

kiri was a stupid model who was soooo beautiful,but couldnt book not one show
because they had to answer question,and again like i said she was stupid.One day Kiri
went out for yet another fashion shop knowing she wouldnt book it....well
anyway.."Okay,so why should we book you"The fashion desighner asked smoothing out hes
beard."Well ummmm,im pretty,and I can walk better than anyone I know." Young Kiri
replied."You may have a pretty face,but can you answer question such as one like
this....The man said uncrossing his leggs that were covered with green plaid pants.He
cleared his throat and began."Answer this question as if you were at a fashion
show."Kiri got up and pushed her blonde hair behind her ears and listened to the
question the fashion designer asked."What would you do if you we president andthe
world would end in three hours?" Kiri sat up and blinked at the man."Go on,I haven`t
got all day"He siad. "Okay here goes" She murmed."Well first I`d have my secretary
warn the united states so everyone could go to las vegas to have as much fun as they
could before they died."Kiri answed,but Kiri didnt make that up,she watched a
movie,and an actress name Vicki Brumbard said that.
  Weeks later she found out that her fashion show was on Saturday.She bought a formal
gown,a questioning gown,and a bikini.  
   Later on Saturday,she prepared for the questiong round and when she choked and
relized cops we in the door way,as when Kiri auditioned for the fashion show she copy
sounded some  one therfore she went to jail and was never seen again.


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umm can you make a contest were people just write

I would, but its more fun to make a doll, too. It only takes like.... 2-10 minutes
to make one, and 10-20 minutes to make up a story and type it down

Here's mine. Sorry, not too good at short stories.

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There was a boy and a girl. One winter night they went out to a restaurant on a date.
They had been dating for 6 months. The boy felt a little awkward by the silence they
shared. When they were almost there, the girl asked the guy to pull over. He pulled
over by a clearing on the side of the road, and turned to her, confused. She said
that she needed to tell him something. She held his hands, and looked into his eyes.
The boy felt so close to her at that moment, he became very warm inside, his body
completely ignoring the cold night. Then he started to pull out a note from his
pocket, but the girl began to talk, and he stopped and listened to her. She started
to say how she didn't feel the same anymore,  and that they should start to see other
people. The boy looked at her, and started to tear, thinking about when they first
met, and  how he felt so happy with her. Now it was all over.

A few seconds later, a car going down a hill on that same street slipped out of
control from the ice. It swerved down the street with it's brights on. The couple saw
it coming and struggled to escape. The boy got out, but the girl's seatbelt was
stuck. He quickly got in and saved her. Sadly the boy didn't get out, and soon died.
The girl had minor injuries and woke up a few days later in the hospital. The paramed

darnit! My post was too long! I'll finish....


The paramedics came in her room, and informed her of a note they found in the boy's
pocket.


The girl read the note. In his handwriting it said, " Without your love, I would
die"



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The rose symbolizes the boy's love for the girl. The dark back round symbolizes the
loneliness the boy has without her.


Enjoy.

omg... that's so sadd.... i think im gonna cry! =,(

The Light and Darkness < --RandomName

Hollywasanormal12yearoldgirl.Shehadanormalfamily:amom,dad,older
brother,adogandahamster.Shehadanormalcrushonthehottestguyinherclass,
Seanandshehadherbestfriend,Leah,whowasalsonormal.ButwhenHollyfalls
downthestairsatherschoolbecauseshesawablackfigure,shewasneverthesame.
Andwhenshewentbacktothesameplace,thesameexacttime,thenextyear,she
getspowers.Andshehastofightthedarknessfromtakingovertheworld.Now,she
cannotgooutatnightoryouwillseeadevilinsteadofa12yearoldgirlbecause
thatisthemarkheleftonher.

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A Day in my Life

Ugh! It's 6:30 and I have to wake up. Mornings are the worst (for me.) I am always in
a grumpy mood when I wake up in the morning. Anyway, today I have to model at 3 shows
in a row. Why?! Because I am a model. My little sister is jumping on my bed now.
"Sissy, Sissy, it's time to wake up you have to model today!" She screams. "Okay.
Fine. I will wake up." I say trying not to yell. Giavonna or Gia, is my little sister
and sometimes she can be a pain. Anyway, I woke up and went downstairs where Chef
Pablo was making eggs and bacon and pancakes. <--My favorite. And I ate up like I've
never seen food until my older sister, Bridgette, came downstairs. "Ugh, don't eat
like that. It's not for a model it's for a-a-a a food monster." she told me. "Well,
I, for one, can eat like a monster and stay in good shape. But that's okay, Bridg,
you keep fighting on that diet and you'll soon be able to eat again." I said while
trying not to laugh. Bridgette said, "Okay, fine, but since we are modeling in New
York City, you might as well know that Deanna's going to be there." she smiled.
UGH!!! I hate Deanna. She is my main competition. 

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And I hate her. But anyway, I get my 3 dresses in my suitcase and I wait for our limo
to get here. When the limo gets here, Bridgette, Giovanna, Mom and I get in it and we
all go to the airport. At the airport, we get on a plane and go to New York City. And
guess who is in the plane? The one and only, DEANNA!!! But, she didn't see me and I
ignored her. When we got to New York City, we got on another limo and went to the
modeling show. Since my mom was the fashion designer of the family and Giovanna,
Bridgette, and I were models, it all worked out. So, I won first in the dress
competition. I won second in the swim-suit competition and I won third in the
everyday wear competition. Luckily, Bridgette and Giovanna won first and second in
everyday wear and Giovanna won first in swim-suit. And Deanna? She won nothing!!!
LOL!!! And that is my day.

all of them are good!!!

Ok here is my eLouai's for round 2

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All mornings are tiering for me. I wake up at 6:30 AM and get dressed. 
I eat breakfest and then go to the elimentery school.... to teach kindergardiners!
At 3:00 I rush home and get on my vet clothes. Then I go to the animal hospital.
Everyday when I walk in someone will say "Christina! HURRY someone needs your help!"
"Ok I'm comeing!!!" I take care of hundreds of different animals. When I'm done doing
that 
I call a limo and go to my concert. After I sing my heart out I go home, eat dinner,
and go to bed! Thats my day!

I have a new account ChocolateCookie

Im late, arnt I?
      

As my eyes slowly opened, I sighed. Yet another day at school. Joy. Sure, its fun to
go sometimes. If only my teacher, Ms. Seguin, wouldnt be so boring and flower
obssesed. I sat up and pulled my legs of the bed. I waited to feel the cold wood
against my toes,. but the feeling never came. I looked down to my feet and gasped. I
HAD A TAIL!I let out a high-pitched scream and stood up. Or at least, tried to. When
I put sll of my weight onto my feet end of tail, I stumbled backwards, but
never fell to the ground. Wait, thats not my bed. Instead of my poka-dotted bed
spread, a smooth roch sat alone by the seaweed. Wait, seaweed?It suddenly came to me.
"IM UNDERWATER!" I cried. I closed my mouth, wondering why I wasnt drowned and dead
by now. Then, I put the pieces together: Im underwater, I have a tale and Im not
drowning. That can only mean one thing-I must be a mermaid!Ive always dreamed of
being one. I dived forward into a front flip, laughing. This is the most fun
ever!Then, I discovered that I wasnt in a room-There wernt even walls!So I swooped
forward and gasped at what I saw-A whole village of mer-people!With long tales,
glistening hair and beauty beyond measure, they had to be!They werent alone. Most
were giggling and playing along with dolphins, sea horses and the fish, all talking.
This is greater then

I ever amagined. Just as I was about to join the crowd of people, a heard a loud
gasp. "Everyone, Look!Its princess Catherine!" Everyone turned to me with wide eyes.
Wait, Imma princess?I guess I was, considering every single person and sea creature
bowed down.To me. I blinked quickly at the sight, and the next thing I knew, I was
sitting on a large chair. A throne. I had a flowered crown, with necklaces and
bracelets on me. "ALL HALE PRINCESS CATHERINE!" A crab called. Everyone repeated and
I smiled. My dream has come true at last.

ignore last story. sorry for the confusion. New DOLL and STORY!! 

"RIng RING RING!!" goes the alarm clock, and I'm forced to wake up. Just another
boring day at school. Uhhh!, I thought, as I got up, and

WAIT A SECOND. HOLD UP. THIS ISN"T MY DREAM LIFE. Now, rewind and wait another 5
hours. 

*computer voice* Sleep mode completed. procede.



"Auuuughh," I yawned as I awoke from my soothing waterbed, without a bad taste in my
mouth or morning breath. Fully refreshed from my 10 hour sleep, I got up and put on
my slippers. Walking into the hallway, I could see a full view of my mansion. I
walked over to my slide and plopped on. With a quick push by my doggy, I slid right
down into my kitchen. What better way to open the day than the smell of fresh cooked
breakfast? i walked over to my counter and got my food that was prepared for me by my
maid. Smelling the aroma, I couldn't wait to dig in. I reached over for a fork and
got a huge mouthful of my scrambled eggs and toast. Once I was done with my
breakfast, I got up and got dressed into my bathing suit. After that I brushed my
teeth and went outside to my pool. 30 feet by 30 feet my pool had a perfect view of
my seaside island estate. I ran over to the diving board and jumped right in with a
swift motion. As soon as I got in I felt the cool water all over my body. Once done
with my 15 laps, I got out and began to tan under the bright Costa Rican sun. Fully
rejuvenated, I went back into my house and got dressed for school. I simply threw on
a green shirt, skinny jeans, and red chucks. I grabbed my red bag, and was out the
door. Outside, I went into my blue jeep and drove to the airport. I got onto a jet
heading to France. After the 30 minute ride, I landed in Tours France and got out. I
walked about 5 minutes to my school and walked into the building. I went strait to my
art room and waited till 2, when my 7th graders came in for their art lesson,
constructed by me of course. I told them about Andy Warhol and his popart, and in an
hour the class was over. I walked back over to the jet and got in for my trip to
Maryland to see some of my family. I ended up eating dinner there and got back home
at 8 o clock. At my house, I just stayed out side, painting the sunset and watching
fireworks in the distance. At 10 I retired to bed and dream pt about my dream lif-
wait! I already live in it!

when r we starting the third round?

when everybody else turns in their 2nd round entry.