Awesome! I like this a lot, so I don't think you could improve much. I only have one
suggestion, dynamic camera angles. It's something I always have a trouble with, so if
you could do them, your work would look SOOO professional. Dynamic camera angles, or
DCAs, are, like the name suggests, neat camera angles. Like, two tiny characters
standing next to a tall one, you could view them from a 3 quarter view and
reaaaaaaally far down, so the tall character looks like Godzilla in height. This is
only a suggestion, but other than that, it's really good!

Thank you!  I'll try the dynamic camera angles!  Thank you so much for your comment!

No problem =D

Yeah, you gotta practice with them first, or it just looks like someone tripped and
fell while taking a picture.

I'll try it on my new comic!  Thank you!

No problem, it's my pleasure.

cool comic

LMFAO!!! :DDD


make him eat them!!!

Yeah, he is going to eat the kitty, or the mouse.  Not sure which one yet.

it really good but can u put some words?
 but anyway....

AWSOMES!

Thank you!  actually, i sorta want this to be a comic without words.  i think its
kinda cool to be able to make a story like that.  (^_^)

yeah cause then lots of people can use their.........

IMAGINATION!

Oooh!  Have you watched that spongebob episode, where he says, "IMAGINATION" with
the little rainbows?  It's awesome!!!!

yeah!

Imaginaaaaaaaaaaaaation...

wow u r good

XD from Sponge bob!

Thanks efg!

Um. ADORABLE. Way to draw adorable little animal comics. Their little squatty bodies
totally remind me of Animal Crossing :3 I love it~

XD I luv dat gaaaaaaammeeeeee!
  Tanks youus :3

Emily!! This is so cute! But I don't think it's going to have a good ending...

XD thanks.  Your right.

i liike it u should make him eat the mouse

I SAY THE DOG SHOULD EAT THE MOUSE! The wolf will be standing back, horrified. 

I can't wait for the next page!

XD thanks.  I was planning to make the wolf eat the mouse but I never did continue 
making the next page....... So yeah, I probably won't finish it.

Err. I meant cat. XDDD


Aw, too bad. Oh well.  I actually thought that the cat and mouse would be so
terrified and sure the wolf was gonna eat them, but the wolf is just friendly.

I've done a sort of fancomic... of what happens next. In a few days I'll have them
scanned in, maybe inked, and I'll send them to you. That is, with your permission.
Just a few doodles I did. I tried to mimic your style, but I failed.

Kept it no words, too. :D Tried to make it as much like this as possible. Oh well.

:D  Yes yes!!!  I'd love to see!  Lemme know when you've got it scanned 'n stuff!

Ok. I'm working on the last page. 

Stay online! O.o