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14 November 2009, 11:51 AM   #1
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So,this is for my friend Shane,who i haven't seen in forever,and he was the first person
to break my heart.'Its better this way,sam.'Yeah right.

I remember
laughing with you
until we cried.
I remember
that old tire swing
and the time we spent there.
I remember
the way your hand felt in mine
with our fingers intertwined.
I remember
the good and the bad
everything from back then.
I remember
the day you entered my life
and the day you weren't there anymore.
I remember
finding a note taped to your door
'sorry i couldn't tell you goodbye.'
I remember
how long i cried
wishing you were there.
I remember 
because some things
never change.

14 November 2009, 03:52 PM   #2
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Nice poem. It reminds me of cousin who I haven't seen for over a year now.
I wonder how she's doing. I heard she changed a lot. And the weird thing is that we live
in the same city.
Her brother, about my age, attend the same school. BUt I still can't see her. Very sad.
But I might get to sneak a peek at her next year :D
.. such a long time ..

15 November 2009, 10:18 AM   #3
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Thanks,i havent seen shane in...5 years i think.

15 November 2009, 11:59 AM   #4
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Posts: 11
i haven't been near my family for 6 years
love isn't really immortal, right?

15 November 2009, 01:14 PM   #5
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Wow, what happened??

15 November 2009, 02:18 PM   #6
Joined: 11 Mar 2009
Posts: 212
createqueen, that is so sad :-(

15 November 2009, 04:31 PM    #7
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Posts: 3
This poem is very touching and well written, something everyone will experience.

createqueen, you okay???  

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