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Guys! I need help T_T

7 September 2009, 02:10 AM   #1
Joined: 18 Aug 2009
Posts: 9
Last edited by kiraKILLER, 7 September 2009
Which version of this picture is better? I need to know which to keep /o/



;3; I feel so very conflicted OTL

ALSO, considering this is a critique club, please tell me how to improve! My
coloring is badd T___T

7 September 2009, 04:14 AM   #2
Joined: 2 Aug 2009
Posts: 22
They're both very good! I prefer the b&w one, but thats because i'm partially colourblind
so I can only see little bits of colour on the bottom one u__u

I think the scarf needs some work with the creases, but other than that (to me) it looks
pretty perfect :D

7 September 2009, 07:01 AM   #3
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 112
I think each picture has its own style. Like the colored one is bold and stands out. But
the bnw one has a somewhat mellow-er feeling to it. Keep both, you never know what you can
do with it. :D
The coloring is fine! At least better than mine... Well, since it feels a bit basic, you
can try to use different shades, with of course the darkest shade at the darkest areas.
But damn, the hair's good as it is. The face to me seemed a tad bit fat, but I kinda like
it that way too...
But gah, it's still better than anything I can do. Good luck~
To love and be loved
To the point of going mad
The sweet and burning kiss is
Senses numbing
Consciousness fading away
The overflowing emotions and
Are painted over in black

7 September 2009, 09:32 AM   #4
Joined: 9 Aug 2009
Posts: 30
The colored looks awesome but I actually prefer black and white... D:

7 September 2009, 01:17 PM   #5
Joined: 18 Aug 2009
Posts: 9
Last edited by kiraKILLER, 7 September 2009
@lollylovex3 Ahha the face is fat T___T I didn't even realize. Thank you for the

@Cry_for_me Yeahh I need to work harder on clothes shading it's my weak point, thanks for
pointing it out to me ;v;

@Starr I prefer the b&w one too ;3;

7 September 2009, 01:27 PM   #6
Joined: 2 Aug 2009
Posts: 22
It's mine too >D

I suck a lot 'cause i have to draw with one eye which is totally crap.


7 September 2009, 01:41 PM   #7
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Last edited by ‹WHITENOISE›, 7 September 2009
I really like black and white. It looks a lot calmer..

I'm not very fancy with my colouring either =___= But if i had to tell you any way of
changing, I would say like..Maybe make the top part of his hair a bit darker, cos its near
the roots, and add more shading. it makes his hair look solid 8 )

7 September 2009, 01:42 PM   #8
Joined: 18 Aug 2009
Posts: 9
@Cry_for_me one eye :O?!

@milomental ahh thank you *_* i will do that next time

7 September 2009, 02:21 PM   #9
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Last edited by ‹WHITENOISE›, 7 September 2009
 8 ) no problem!!

11 September 2009, 03:49 PM    #10
Joined: 6 Sep 2009
Posts: 53
I like the cour one personally because it feels softer some how...
'When life thows you lemons keep them because hey, free lemons'

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