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WRITING: Poetry: The Mirror


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29 June 2009, 09:41 PM   #1
Joined: 29 Jun 2009
Posts: 28
I look deep into her eyes
Hardened by fear
Betrayed by lies
Her face says she's tough
Her voice will say she's had enough
But those fragile fingers on the countertop
They twitch and flinch and never stop
Oh, no, they never stop
Never will they ever stop
It breaks my heart
To see this girl
Once so high
On top of the world
But reality is strong enough to pull her back to the ground
There where she must hide her shame among the crowd
I look in the mirror
But refuse to see
This girl as what now must be me
What have I done
To loose all I had
To loose all the friends
To be so plain mad
At all around me,
I swear and fight
Then in my bed,
I cry at night
And who will know
Who could recognize
This girl I see,
Staring back at me?
I need a hope
I need a light
Something to look to
In the arctic night
Where beauty abounds
In everything
There, my friends, is what I need

30 June 2009, 01:28 AM   #2
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whoa thats kewl. its deep  loved it!

2 July 2009, 03:07 PM   #3
Joined: 2 Jul 2009
Posts: 26
Go, Ar-ca-tect!

2 July 2009, 05:46 PM   #4
Joined: 29 Jun 2009
Posts: 28
Now I'm an architect????
I need a hope
I need a light
Something to look to
In the arctic night
Where beauty abounds
In everything
There, my friends, is what I need

3 July 2009, 08:19 AM    #5
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I liked it a lot! great job on this, it's very cool.



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