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WRITING: Poetry: Peace

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18 May 2009, 05:25 PM   #1
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I hear the horns in the distance call Announcing of Jerusalem's fall I let the raindrops lick my face And look to Heaven and pray for Grace The hurt and pain I brought to you All those loving things that were untrue Daggers and shields and useless tools The passengers stream to the Ship-of-Fools Loving you was the single decision I ever made with perfect vision Now the stars and hoary frost Wrap around me like someone lost It seems I'll never be warm again At least the night will end the pain (2/09)

18 May 2009, 09:35 PM   #2
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i really like it.

18 May 2009, 10:16 PM   #3
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thats really good eddie

6 June 2009, 04:29 AM   #4
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I love it!

6 June 2009, 06:41 PM    #5
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wow,very deep..love it 
i like this part,"Now the stars and hoary frost
Wrap around me like someone lost"

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