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5 November 2009, 09:31 PM   #1
Joined: 9 Jun 2008
Posts: 669
I was bored (again), and well I decided to start another short story. This is short, but
I really don't care, and I am totally not in the mood to write more. Oh, and just so you
know it looks much better in my word doc. LOL

HorsesLover*: I missed you!
Lucy101: I know, and I missed you too!
HorseLover: I wish we could just met, and talk all the time. I told my friends about you
already, and they said you should cool.
Lucy101: That would be the best! Yet, that will like never happen.
HorseLover: Argh! My annoying brother is kicking me off. I will talk to you soon.
Lucy101: Bye!

	I stared at the screen. How was I going to tell my friend (online) that I was moving?
Argh…and plus my parents won’t even tell me where we are moving to! Well, let me tell
you some things about me. My name is Nikkie Smith. I am 15 years old, and I have lived in
Chicago, IL for my whole life. I am a sophomore, and I have wonderful friends, that I
love, but yet I have to say bye to. It was like my worst day EVER! Of course they gave me
their numbers, so I could call them, but it totally won’t be the same! That is why I am
writing this story. Right now I am in the car, driving to god knows. 
	“Nikkie honey we are in North Dakota,” said my mom.
	“That’s nice, and where are we going?” I asked.
	“Here,” said my dad. 
	“What?” I asked. I mean come on! No one lives in North Dakota.
	“Yes, this is where we are going, and we are here,” said my dad while turning into
the house. 


*I might change the name later!*

PLEASE tell me what you think!

5 November 2009, 10:19 PM   #2
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COOL COOL LOVE IT WRITE MORE

6 November 2009, 12:36 AM   #3
Joined: 9 Jun 2008
Posts: 669
Thanks! I will totally write more.

6 November 2009, 11:20 PM   #4
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Posts: 669
I wrote a little more. I wish I could write more, but I have to go out to dinner. I will
be back in about an hour or so.

     	“Yes, this is where we are going, and we are here,” said my dad while turning
into the house. The house was medium size. It was a light blue almost white. It had a
brown door, and windows. The house looked empty for years. 
	“Um…dad? How long has this house not been you know brought?” I asked.
	“For about five years,” said my dad. Great! I have an old house, and no friends. This
is the story of my life. There was houses around the house that I will be living in…and
I will give it a plus, but there was NO school around. 
	“Don’t worry sweetie. The school is only about ten miles away. You will be taking the
bus,” said my mom reading my mind. I already DID take the bus. Yet, the only reason we
took the bus was too much traffic. I looked at my mom like she was crazy. My dad already
walked in the house. My mom followed. I totally didn’t want to go into that house, but I
heard them call for my name. I mean you can’t miss my mom calling me! She has the
loudest voice ever! I got out of the car, with my i-pod in one hand, i-phone in my pocket,
and my Apple laptop in my bag. I walked up the sidewalk. I felt eyes on me. I sighed, and
looked around. No one. That’s strange…I am never wrong with those things. 

7 November 2009, 01:53 PM   #5
Joined: 9 Jun 2008
Posts: 669
My computer is not working, but I did type some more:

        “Don’t worry sweetie. The school is only about ten miles away. You will be
taking the bus,” said my mom reading my mind. I already DID take the bus. Yet, the only
reason we took the bus was too much traffic. I looked at my mom like she was crazy. My dad
already walked in the house. My mom followed. I totally didn’t want to go into that
house, but I heard them call for my name. I mean you can’t miss my mom calling me! She
has the loudest voice ever! I got out of the car, with my i-pod in one hand, i-phone in my
pocket, and my Apple laptop in my bag. I walked up the sidewalk. I felt eyes on me. I
sighed, and looked around. No one. That’s strange…I am never wrong with those things.
I walked into the house. I ran upstairs to get the room I want. I heard my parents yelling
at me that they get the master bedroom. I don’t care, if they do. On my left there were
two rooms. One was the master the other one was REALLY small. I turned to my right. There
was only one bedroom. It was bigger than the master one. That’s strange I thought. I put
my things on the bed. I ran back downstairs.
	“There is still the master bedroom,” I said. “Are the rest of my things in the
moving truck?” I asked. My mom and dad nodded. “What’s wrong?”
	“Oh, it’s just that this house needs more fixing than we thought. 

7 November 2009, 05:28 PM   #6
Joined: 9 Jun 2008
Posts: 669
I wrote some more! YAY for me!!! LOL

   "Oh, the house just needs more fixing up than we thought," said my dad, and smiled.
Great now they love fixing up old crappy houses. Just my luck. I walked outside without
saying anything more. The guy was there with the truck.
   "Where are your parents?" he asked.
    "They are inside, but they told me to tell you..." I started but got that feeling that
someone was starring at me again. The guy walked around me, and went inside. I looked
around no one. Then I saw it out of the corner of my eye. 
   "What's the matter sweetie?" asked my mom. I didn't notice that she came up from behind
me.
   "Nothing," I answered. 
   "They are going to move all the stuff where we asked them to. So we were thinking of
meting the neighbors. Want to come?" she asked. First off you don't met the neighbors
anymore. Second off I had nothing to do, besides sit on the nasty floor and go on sites.
Or I could call my friends, but all of that didn't matter to me. My friends were gone.
They probably will fade away. They will just ask about me from time to time just like in
the movies. I guess maybe it would be a good thing to met the neighbors even if it meant
that I look like a fool doing it. 
   "I guess, but can you do me a favor?" I asked. "Can you like tell the people to like
hurry up?"

8 November 2009, 02:15 AM   #7
Joined: 9 Jun 2008
Posts: 669
I wrote some more. Sorry, that they have been sooo short, but I like never have time.
LOL

   My mom starred down at me. "Why?" she asked.
   "Because I have things planed on my laptop...you know the internet," I said. She rolled
her eyes. I thought she was going to go back into her speech about when she grew up in a
very poor family they never had the internet even when it did come out. Luckily my dad
saved me. He walked outside.
   "Well, aren't you guys coming?" he asked while walking towards the house. I walked with
my mom. I should have worn something better. I mean I was wearing dark jeans, and a
t-shirt with pandas on it. I should have changed and maybe put some makeup, because
everyone knows that what you wear when you first see them is what they judge you on.
Anyways, my dad rang the door bell. Nothing. No, I will be right there. No, footsteps. No,
opening the door. My dad looked at my mom strange. 
   "What is up?" I asked in a nasty voice. My mom sighed, and gave my dad a look that said
you tell her. My dad took a deep breath, but before he could the door opened and there was
a women there.
   "Jimmy! What a surprise! I mean I was expecting you, but not at this time!" yelled the
women. I gave my mom and dad a look. How does this person know us? I NEVER seen her in my
life before. "Oh, and my god Nikkie you grew! You are so beautiful!" The lady looked like
she was going to tell me, but I screamed. I mean I just didn't scream I yelled. They all
looked at me, and people started coming out of their houses just to see what was wrong. "I
see she doesn't remember me." No, of course not lady!
   "Nikkie, this is Lilly, she was my best friend," said my mom. What? Is that why they
moved here. Just so my mom could see her best friend, yet they had to take mine away from
me? That didn't seem right. No, it wasn't right. "Sweetie we moved here, because Lilly is
have a baby and she helped me with you, so I thought I should return the favor." WHAT! Is
this is all about? I mean I honestly don't care. I mean she made me say good bye to all my
friends back home. She was evil. She would pay, and NOW. I gave her a nasty look, and
walked back inside to my room. I sat on the bed that they put up. In fact everything was
in my room where I wanted it to go. I smiled. I boot up my laptop, while listening to the
hum. I logged in to the website I always am on doing things on end. There was no new
messages or comments. I sighed. I looked at my friends, but no one was on. I logged on to
aim.com. All my friends at home were on. 

Well, that's it for now. LOL

8 November 2009, 03:40 PM   #8
Joined: 9 Jun 2008
Posts: 669
I wrote some more...yawn..no comments.

   I made a chat room, and clicked on all of my friends to join me. They all did. 
   i<3matt(Amalia): wazz up?
   softballplayer65(Taylor): we haven't heard from you in like hours!
   me: guys, i need to tell you something
   twilight(Bella): go right ahead
   
   My ten friends were waiting for me to type the answer. 

   Me: we came here because my moms friend is having a baby and she needed to return the
favor

   I lot of responses came up. Most of them were saying like what or that's impossible,
but my favorite one was that is stupid. I logged off, which my friends were going to be
pissed at me for doing it, but I really don't care. I mean I have a lot of other stuff to
do. I have to unpack all of my clothes, and some other things. I opened the first box that
said hangers. I put up the hangers in my huge walk in closet. God, why is this room so
white? I hope we repaint it soon. I mean this house is crap. I backed off, and looked at
my rainbow hangers. They looked really nice against the white. I guess its not so bad. I
grabbed the closest box that said shoes. I laid my shoes on the floor in the closest. My
ten colorful shoes looked great with the white background. I started to like it when my
mom walked in the room.
   "We need to talk now," she said.
   "Talk," I said.
   "That was very rude. You do know that they threw us a party and everything! Everyone in
the neighborhood..." I cut her off.
   "And the next one, and the one after that," I said. My mom ignored me and went on.
   "Is there. You should have been there, and that is why you are coming now," she
finished.
   "Um...can't you see that I am busy?" I asked.
   "You have two days to unpack," said mom.
   "I am going to school tomorrow," I said.
   "Yeah, to pick up your school stuff," my mom said. I sighed. Darn...she ruined it. I
wanted to go to school tomorrow. 
   "Can I get dressed first?" I asked.
   "If you are not there in about ten minutes you are grounded," said my mom.

That's it for now...because I am getting super bored. LOL

21 November 2009, 05:30 AM   #9
Joined: 14 Aug 2009
Posts: 2
the story is nice . do write more (:
When life gives you a hundred reasons to CRY , give life a thousands reason to SMILE (:

21 November 2009, 03:50 PM   #10
Joined: 9 Jun 2008
Posts: 669
Thanks!!!!

23 December 2009, 03:27 PM   #11
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I like it. Are you going to do more with the character nikki is talking  in the
beggining?

23 December 2009, 07:29 PM    #12
Joined: 9 Jun 2008
Posts: 669
Yeah, I am going to do lost more.



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