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WRITING: Poetry: The Fire

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1 August 2009, 08:41 PM   #1
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~*Metaphor of what I would do for a friend*~

Walking through fire
To get to my friend
To reach the end
I'll save them then bring them back
Turn my back to the attack
I'll look in you in the face
Hear your heart race
I've been betrayed
You know who's to blame
My pride has been wounded
My sight gone away
But still my friend, I'll go out of my way
If you need me, just ask
I'll tredge through the rain
To untie you from the tracks
And bring you back again
I'll expect it
And you should, too
So don't you dare act surprised
When despite what you've done
I race to your side
That'd be an insult
Of the worst degree
To have you have
So little faith in me
I'll walk through the flames
To help you excape
We'll get through this trial
Until we get to the light
And know, my friend
I won't remember the slight
I need a hope
I need a light
Something to look to
In the arctic night
Where beauty abounds
In everything
There, my friends, is what I need

3 August 2009, 09:31 PM   #2
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if it burns; its fire
if it hurts; its fire
if it doesn't heal; its fire
if it can't be stop; its fire
if its wild; its fire
if its destruction; its fire

If it's Energy;; it's Fire
'Avatar the Last Airbender'
--came to mind C:


20 August 2009, 02:50 AM    #3
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the flaims of my love burned for you,
but you just put it out with a 'shoo'
my heart turned black,
then the stone cracked,
and under was a cracking glass
a few seconds later, 
laying in the grass,
the glass has shatterd
i fell into the passed,
my body shutterd,
i wanted to cry,
but on the inside i knew i were to die,
i let myself fall, i didnt even hide,
i relaxed and waited, untill i surely did die..
.on the inside...

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