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13 July 2009, 10:39 AM   #1
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 112
OMG, I'm gonna get bashed at so bad....
Anyways, here's Kagamine Rin. I KNOW the arm is off and the anatomy is pretty bad. 
I drew this for as an ad for my contest. (Please check out my diary for more info~)


NOW CRITICZE AWAY!
To love and be loved
To the point of going mad
The sweet and burning kiss is
IMITATION
Senses numbing
Consciousness fading away
The overflowing emotions and
Reality
Are painted over in black
-IMITATION BLACK

13 July 2009, 12:07 PM   #2
Joined: 11 Jul 2009
Posts: 17
--erm-- Very well done, aside from my hatred of rin, this is very nice. And the middle finger is off itself though, and I do believe the sleeves are a tad bit longer, but none-the-less, it's very nice. C: Though, if it's not just my imagintation, doesn't Rin have some kind of barrette thingie on the other side too? --trying to remeber---Uh, I'm not into Rin so I can't remeber well. AND SINCE WHEN'D RIN GET BOOBS? (Lmmfao, ohgod that was random. xD)
Couriousity Killed The Cat. But Since When Were We Cats? Ohyeah. I came up with that. ♥

13 July 2009, 01:05 PM   #3
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 8
The only minor problem I see is that the folds in the shirt, (you know the little lines
at the edge of the shirt and near her tie) are slightly off. And, the arm didn't get any
less dense. If you were to cuff your hand around her wrist and then move up, You could
tell her lower arm, is just as thick as her upper arm.
Other than that you did a very nice job, I happen to love the background with all it's
different thickness and colors. :D
LOLOL.

I bet you don't know what I'm lololing about.

13 July 2009, 09:41 PM   #4
Guest Poster
Okay so first I want to say that I really like the background :}
It's simple but it's just so happy and cute! haha
The coloring for her hair and the shading on her skin is pretty nice too~
The only problem that you really have is the arm, and that's because it's 
at an unnatural angle. Like I tried doing that pose in the mirror, and it
really hurt, haha.
But I made you a redline so hopefully this will help :3
Photobucket
I might have made the hand a bit too small compared to the face, but
you basically get my point.
Also next time you should try out your poses like in the mirror too!
I find it to be really helpful and I do it a whole lot.
<3

14 July 2009, 07:07 AM   #5
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 112
These are all awesome advice/critic. I know I fail at clothing folds and anatomy.

@‹○♥Shineba♥Iinoni♥○›
Ya, she also had clips on the other side; but dang, I got lazy -.- And ya, I realized that
the sleeve thingys were too short. >.>
Lol, IDK how Rin got boobs. I just prefer girls to be more busty? Pervy me OTL

@‹IisWurmple;;HearMeRAWR♥› 
Thanks for the advice, and ya, I can't visualize clothing folds and stuffs. *dies*

@karolinacake
Omg, you are awesome. Thank you so much for doing that redline thingy. I see where the
heck went wrong =_=
And dude, I never pose in the mirror. It feels weird D:

Anyways, THANK YOU ALL! :D
To love and be loved
To the point of going mad
The sweet and burning kiss is
IMITATION
Senses numbing
Consciousness fading away
The overflowing emotions and
Reality
Are painted over in black
-IMITATION BLACK

18 July 2009, 10:58 AM    #6
Guest Poster
Ahh I'm glad it helped!
If you ever change this, I'd definatly like to see it :3

and ahahah, really? Man, you should though.
(besides it makes you feel really fabulous, posing and everything,
ohohohoh'ya :D )


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