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10 March 2010, 11:04 PM   #1
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My parents think I'm at school studying. They would kill me if they knew i was downtown
Portland going to a gay-straight alliance meeting. My parents are hard core Christians,
and  I'm a lesbian. Do you see my problem? My mom has me on a leash. If they would be more
cool, i would be doing crazy things and i would have the perfect girlfriend. I would have
short choppy hair and a septum with a lip ring and gauges with tattoos! But nope, i have
long hair all one freaking length and i have my ears pierced. Thats all I know your
probably thinking come one your life can't be all that bad stop feeding us your sad
bull-shit! Well beside that my life consist of a friendless Christan school. So yeah it
does kinda suck. 
  I hop off the max and go to the building, it a faded gray color with ton a graffiti on
it. The meeting room smells sorta like latex and peaches. Kinda awkward. There are bean
bags in a circle and sadly enough there are no girls. Only gay guys. I have good luck
don't I? 

So thats kinda like a low key preview, thanks for reading yo! (:

11 March 2010, 06:57 PM   #2
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there are some spelling errors but good job so far

12 March 2010, 08:53 PM   #3
Joined: 9 Jun 2008
Posts: 669
Last edited by ‹∞ Directioner ∞›, 12 March 2010
Some spelling errors.

Maybe you should look up how to spell a word before you type up the story?


You. Have. Run. On. Sentences.


Sentences that keep going on and on.

Break them up or had a conjunction.

What's a conjunction?

A conjunction is a good that adds one sentence with another sentence.

Here is a list:

A   after   although   and   as   as far as   as how   as if   as long as   as
soon as   as though   as well as 
B   because   before   both   but 
E   either   even if   even though 
F   for 
H   how   however 
I   if   if only   in case   in order that 
N   neither   nor   now 
O   once   only   or 
P   provided 
R   rather than 
S   since   so   so that 
T   than   that   though   till 
U   unless   until 
W   when   whenever   where   whereas   wherever   whether  
Y   yet  

Oh, and also try not to start a sentence with AND or BUT.


I have questions for you:

What grade are you in?

Do you do grammar in school?

Do you type up the story here or somewhere else where they check your grammar/spelling.
(EX. Word)


I love the plot of the story.

12 March 2010, 09:04 PM   #4
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Wow, you were a lil bit  of a bitch about that. Straight up.

13 March 2010, 11:41 AM   #5
Joined: 9 Jun 2008
Posts: 669
I am sorry!

I had a HUGE headache and wasn't feeling really good.


But I still mean what I said...even if it was a little harsh.

13 March 2010, 12:30 PM   #6
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Yeah, whatever. I'm leaving the club cause i aint trying to be bitched at every time you
got a head ache.

13 March 2010, 06:38 PM    #7
Joined: 9 Jun 2008
Posts: 669
Well, I am sorry.

And I was just telling you that you have run on sentences.

I didn't think it was going to hurt you.

I. Just. Put. It. Like. This. So. You. Would. Understand. It.

Don't go all bitchy on me either.

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