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hhmm .. i actuallu coloured it in

4 January 2010, 06:22 AM   #1
Joined: 7 Dec 2009
Posts: 55
usually i just sketch all my traditional stuff in black and white..i decided to colour
this one in...the skin was done by computer though XD

tell me ..is it any good

her name is Quiliee ( pronounced keelie lol) and shes another OC of mine

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Quiliee OC by ~colourfulcatastrophe on deviantART
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4 January 2010, 07:12 AM   #2
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Wow that's really good! What did you colour is with?

4 January 2010, 08:45 AM   #3
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 112
The skin's looking a bit flat; add some more shades to it. It's looking good.
To love and be loved
To the point of going mad
The sweet and burning kiss is
Senses numbing
Consciousness fading away
The overflowing emotions and
Are painted over in black

4 January 2010, 04:07 PM   #4
Joined: 7 Dec 2009
Posts: 55

~ thanxs , i used a mix of texta crayons and pencils and the skin i did in photo filtre

@lollylovex3 thanx for the advice
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5 January 2010, 04:41 AM   #5
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I like the way you colored the hair, it's pretty unique. <333
The outfit itself is pretty good~
The tattoos look pretty interesting. o3o

Get ready for some harsh criticism? oAo;; If you don't want any, please do skip the
rest of this comment.

It's pretty good, however, the arms are too short, and I fail to see an elbow.
.____. I suggest more curves in the arms and face profile?
And I think you put the bra-thing a bit too high, but I'm not really certain about that.
You can ignore that one if you want.

Also, I suggest some shading with an actual light source, not just following the creases
of the clothes. .3.
I think the same goes for the skin? Shading makes a drawing stand out. <3

And then more anatamy and proportion. I'm afraid the head's too big for the body in
general. Hands are too small, and I the left arm's (her left) is awkwardly hiding behind
her back. .A. Her right thigh's looking a bit skinny there. XDD 

The blue rope-things that are on her head? Well, I suggest you make them more flowing, use
more curves. >u< Don't just follow one curve, treat it like a strand of hair~ It'll look
much more natural and nicer. ;'D

Color composition needs a bit of work~ Do learn to contrast. With the background blue as
well as her clothes, I believe that's a bit much.

Lastly, I advise you to add a feeling of depth to her accessories. >u< The necklace thing
(the red one) - quite frankly - looks like a tattoo.

Hope it helps~:'D
However, I suck at drawing, so you may ignore that if you want. XDDD

5 January 2010, 04:49 AM   #6
Joined: 7 Dec 2009
Posts: 55

thanks for the constructive critism~ i'm always looking to improve my art ~ but yeah i am
aware of most of the flaws already~ it was just a "i'm up late and cant sleep so i will
draw random shit" XD

~ the necklace thingie the red one is a another tatoo btw and the lack of elbows is well,
i forgot to do em' 

~ i can contrast, i just like the colour blue...sorry if it bothers you

thanks for expressing your views
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5 January 2010, 04:54 AM   #7
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Oh, so it's a tattoo? o___o;; I'm sorry, I must be blind. u___u It's just that the
pattern with which you made it reminds me of my own necklaces. .3.

Really? o.o Oh well~

5 January 2010, 05:09 AM   #8
Joined: 7 Dec 2009
Posts: 55

eh' is ok

it was sposed to come off looking a bit lie a necklace..its more clear when you are
actually looking at the paper i guess
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5 January 2010, 08:26 PM   #9
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wow thats great!

9 January 2010, 02:51 PM   #10
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 110
I like the design and definately he hair o3o

But... What's up with the right ear?
From this position, you shouldn't really be able to see it, I think...
'a rose by any other name still draws blood'

12 January 2010, 05:07 AM    #11
Joined: 7 Dec 2009
Posts: 55

i just used photofiltre



i kinda agree with you but when i took it out it didnt look quite right to me so i left it
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