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19 April 2008, 11:29 PM   #1
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I'm 12cute and I am new here. I don't know what to do so i need a little help.
Uh...i will try to um...do...things right,and me good. So yea, just help me out.


19 April 2008, 11:59 PM   #2
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dont worry about a thing . u couldn't possibly do any thing wrong here

20 April 2008, 04:41 PM   #3
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ok thanx so wht do we do here anyway

20 April 2008, 05:16 PM   #4
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just read and write stories really

20 April 2008, 06:13 PM   #5
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ok then i guess i'll fit in perfectly

20 April 2008, 07:14 PM   #6
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Last edited by ‹Supercalafragalisticespialadocious.›, 22 April 2008
...She walked a lonly path until she reached the door.
Ding Dong. Ding Dong she waited patently on the footstep looking around as if a
ghost should pop out and greet her.

"Hello, anybody home?"
She stood on the step thinking all the time she was wasting when she could just pee in the

The house looked inhabited and very scary.
The shingles were busted and the door looked as if it was borken of it's hinges,and the
windows were tinted with dust.
She herself didn't know why she stoped there,so she slowly turned around and headed for
the stairs.
In about a second the door was opended and a women was sanding there with a warm smile
that  read "hi howya doin'?"
But Intella knew better than to trust the outside of a person, she had some times when she
didn't even  know who she was.

Intella was a tall gangly girl at the age of 15 with drak hair and big brown eyes her skin
was a golden brown that shown ever so brightly when it hit the light.
She wasn't as preety as the models and singers but she had her own essence. A grace about
herself. And it wasn't until 5 monthes ago did that grace leave 
with her mom. Her parents divorced and Intella felt that when her mom left everything good
about her life went out the door with her.

The woman stared at Intella with golden eyes as warm as the sun.
"May i help you young woman?" she asked.
"Uh, yea can..I mean may i use your bathroom?"
"Oh, of course you may, right this way."

She led Intella through a hollow corridor to a door with the word RESTROOM printed
on it.  
She moitenied fo r Intella to go through the door. Intella did as she pleased.
Afterward intella thanked the woman and soon leraned her name was Fusha...Fusha

Intella walked outside. Then turned a corner. She was stranded, all alone with no where to
The truth is that she went on a school trip but the bus borke down and turned on fire. So
a couple of frineds and her went their sperate ways.
*which was pretty dumb to me, but i'm just the narrator, and no one listens to me* 
She walked and walken and walked until her feet were sore.
So she dicided to set camp right there and then, she was very lucky 'cause when her
parents were together her father took hef camping a lot.
Intella was so thrilled that she listned to her father and took her camping gear.*wht a
coincidink if ya ask me*

Intella laid her head in her sleeping bag and closed her eyes, and before she knew it she
was asleep, snoring and all.

"Intella...Ella, wake up, wake up, ugh!"
"C'mon Ella we have to get outta here it's dangerous...ew you got drool on my hand!"
Intell sat up quickly when she recognized the voice, it was her frined Dawn.

Dawn had golden brown skin and looked a lot like Intella, if you didn't know better you'd
say they were sisters.
"Hey, hey no need for yelling ok? I'm just getting changed...i suggest you do the same."
"Hell, my head hurts."
"Well,sorry . Hurry up we have to get outta here!"
" 'Cause we gotta find our bus and Freddy and everyone else>"
" Why you care 'bout 'em anyway they the ones that left us, not the other way 'round."

Intell got up changed and bit into an apple.Then handed Dawn one to. She took it quicker
that than a bullet.
"So, how you find me anyway?" asked Intella.
"Well,i heard you snoring about a mile away1" Dawn chuckled.
"Very funny."

They walked the 3 next miles in silence chewing on bits of their apple.
Has they neared the bus they heard noises that sounded like guns being shooted. 
They looked about suspicous;y and saw the old lady...Fusha.

"Look Dawn it's the old lady I was 'talkin tou you about"
"the old lady with the house?" Dawn asked unimpressed.
"Yea,lets ho say Hi!"
As they approched Fusha...Fusha cought a glimps of them coming her way.

Fusha looked like the grandma in hanzel and gretel only she looked more modern. In the
darkness of her house 
Intella did't quiut see wht she looked like but it didint matter to her.

Today Intella sa how she really looked and it surprised her half to death.

"Intella...Thats the woman who helped you? Dawn asked with a whole lot of attitude.
"Ewww....but yea...I did't get to see how she looked that good but she looks....ok i
"Intella i dont think weshould do this lets go look for the bus. I heard more sounds that
"No it'll be quick. JJust hold on."

Intella ran to meet up with Fusha. She thanked Fusha thoughtfully but as she turned to
leave...Dawn wasn't standing there anymore!!!!

It's a mistery

20 April 2008, 07:34 PM   #7
Joined: 18 Apr 2008
Posts: 17
Can't wait to read more!

Whoever said penguins were nice?

20 April 2008, 07:41 PM   #8
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lol thanx
and do u have any other suggestions for me like things you want to happen in the story??

20 April 2008, 08:13 PM   #9
Joined: 18 Apr 2008
Posts: 17
I dunno..
Umm..something suspensful!!!!

Whoever said penguins were nice?

20 April 2008, 09:13 PM   #10
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maybe the old lady should pop up- and turn out being a witch tying to kill her and
dawn.....?  just shooting ideas

22 April 2008, 08:09 PM   #11
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you know that is very good 
i'm puttin it in!!!!!!!! 


22 April 2008, 09:00 PM   #12
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lol cool..................

22 April 2008, 11:24 PM   #13
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so did y9u read it i added more i want ppl to like feel the suspense

31 May 2008, 09:56 PM   #14
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lol Hansel and Gretals grandmother

1 June 2008, 04:08 AM    #15
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yea i guess

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