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12 March 2010, 08:57 PM   #1
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Last edited by ‹∞ Directioner ∞›, 13 March 2010
I read two pretty new stories.

They have something in common.

What do they have in common?

They both have run on sentences.

Also, they have other grammar mistakes and even spelling mistakes.

Just answer these few questions for me to see what you are doing:

- What grade are you in?

- Do you do grammar in that grade?

- Do you do spelling in that grade?

- Do you type your stories here or another place that checks your spelling and grammar
errors? (EX. Word)


Thanks for answering the questions!!

12 March 2010, 09:10 PM   #2
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What I have notice?Just pointing out the fact of how that doesn't make sense.

12 March 2010, 09:44 PM   #3
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- Do you do grammar in that grade? - Do you do spelling in that grade?
but even those aren't grammatically correct. -Do you go over grammar in that grade? -Do you go over spelling in that grade? that isn't much of an improvement, but it makes more sense. and can you at least point some out? it's not exactly helpful if no one does. because writers tend to skim over sentences, you know.

13 March 2010, 11:00 AM   #4
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childhood: You're right, too. The title doesn't make sense. What would you have
named it?

Again I couldn't think of a title, so I put down the first thing in my head down.

autopsy: You are right they aren't grammatically correct.

Thanks for pointing that out!

I wrote this so fast, because I was tired.

What do you mean by pointing some out?

13 March 2010, 11:18 AM   #5
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like, when you read a story,
you have to tell us.
not just make a post that tells us to read it, for reasons already spoken.

and what Childhood meant was,
you wrote the title in past-tense.
to you need to fix it to:
What I Have Noticed

13 March 2010, 11:36 AM   #6
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Okay, thanks!

13 March 2010, 04:45 PM   #7
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Last edited by ‹❄Shexia: The Wintery Archer❄›, 13 March 2010
- I am in grade six.
- Yes, we do study grammar and spelling. I am rather good at it, too. Oh, dear, I hope I
don't sound conceited.
- For that answer, look above. I don't feel like typing the same thing twice.
- No, but I have confidence in my grammar.

13 March 2010, 06:37 PM    #8
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You don't sound conceited, and I find it great that you are confidence in your grammar.

I wish I was like that, but I am not!

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