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WRITING: Poetry: Promise that you won't forget

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20 February 2010, 06:14 PM   #1
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Last edited by Oroborus21, 20 February 2010
Paint my day with sunny skies,
Paint my night with stars arise,
Paint my life with no regret,
But promise me you won't forget.

Make the moon's light glow,
Make the sun's warmth show,
Make the beach orange at sun-set,
But promise me you won't forget.

May you brighten up my life,
Cut the cake with a silver knife,
Glitter like a gold beret,
But promise me you won't forget..................................that life's not perfect.

there it is!

Saturday 20th February 2010

erm, ok then  

20 February 2010, 06:20 PM   #2
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Last edited by Oroborus21, 20 February 2010
when you get a moment, please edit your title.

we try and follow a standard nomenclature in here to make it easy to spot the different

in this case like you should put:

WRITING: Poetry: Name of the poem

if it doesnt have a title then put untitled or something as a working title...

btw, you may notice i like to put at the bottom the date i wrote the poem or when it was
completed...its just something i do but i recommend it so that we can get a feel for
progress and changes over time or know somethng about what you were doing at that time in
your life when you wrote it..

and finally....we are all trying to improve in here and be appreciated for our efforts and
creations. dont put yourself down or be negative....constructive criticism is appreciated
in here but we try to keep it positive and supportive.

writing....especially poetry opens us up and reveals our vulnerabilities so we always want
to appreciate that.

(what  i mean by the above is don't say your poem is "not so good")

it is ALL Good in here!

20 February 2010, 06:31 PM    #3
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Ok, thanx is it betetr now?  

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