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6 February 2009, 07:01 PM   #1
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all should make a short story so we can see and all it would be creative

6 February 2009, 07:22 PM   #2
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The world is gonna end with me in it 

i wake up on day to screaming and shouting and i think to myself "i knew it wouldn't last
as i thought my mother came barging in and was screaming at me," you're worthless why were
you born"
see i didnt know what i did until she told me. she found out about my drug use and was
completely disgraced. i gave my mother a nickname its the hooker. she is such a hypocrit
she tells me not to do drugs when she goes and gets high everynight. i scream at the top
of my lungs, " see this is why i do drugs your a bitch who shouldnt be here you tell me
that i should never have a boyfriend but you have 6. you're a slut and i hope you live
your life in a cell.

      That morning i ran away i didnt know where i was going all i knew is that i was
leaving that whore house i wasnt gonna end up like her i was gonna have a life all she
needed to do was trust me then i would still be at home but no she had to go and trust the
drugs again. i ran to my best friend rhiannon she would know wat to do she would help me .
i went to her house knocked on the door. i grabed her by her arm and dragged her outside
she could tell by the reddness under my eyes and the tears in my eyes that the hooker did
it she broke me she riuned my life and i wasnt gonna let that continue. she screamed at me
and yelled " what did she do tell me now." i told her everything and she said that she was
running away with me she wasnt gonna let me go off and be raped again. so we started off
to the safest place in our lifes. the sk8te park........

6 February 2009, 08:29 PM   #3
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this is my chapter 1 of the book im making 

                                 Chapter 1 
                                The Attack 

	I awoke in a Daze to large metal clashing, with the sound of bombs going of and people
running and screaming. I was in the navy I was Pvt. Jackson. I was on my bunk sleeping
when it happened. The boat was in a port named Pearl Harbor. I saw everyone was trying to
get to the top as it was getting bombed. They didn’t want to sink to the bottom with the
boat. I got up to follow them but I stumbled and fell I was really tired. Then Lieutenant
Vickers grabbed my arm and pulled me up. “ He said don’t give up we are leaving.” I
ran out of the room. So did Vickers but by the time he got close to the door the ceiling
fell in crushing him and killed him. 
	As I ran along the narrow hallways I saw dead soldiers and broken pipes spitting out
steam. The kitchens were on fire. I ran, no men were there to help they were either dead
or at the top already.  The ship was falling apart doorways were closed off and there was
no escape. The Carbon Dioxide from the fires was eating at my lungs. I was going to die
like Vickers. 
	Then the top blew reveling light and fresh air. I got Cpl. Hanes to pull me out of there.
I was saved but the planes were everywhere they were Japanese fighters. We were in a war
we didn’t want to fight ww2. Cpl. Hanes yelled at me “Grab a gun and fire private we
wont go down without a fight!” I grabbed a gewher and started to fire shots at the plane
and nothing happened. Not one hole not even a mark on the plane it was really strange. The
ship was sinking we were running out of time then I saw something that wasn’t human
inside the cockpit of the fighter. Then boom the ship blew people fell and the ship was
almost fully in the water. We were out of time.

7 February 2009, 12:49 AM   #4
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Lika what deos it have to be about?

7 February 2009, 12:56 AM   #5
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Chapter 1: The Death

"Mother! Father!" the little girl screamed as she saw her parents get shot in front
of her face.She started running over to her parent's side and cried as she hugged
them tightly. "Don't cry, Akia. Please be a good girl." whispered her mother as she
touched Akia's cheek. "Akia....Take care of the company. And...Akia?" "Yes father."
Akia replied as she looked into her father's eyes. "Find out who shot us......that
is my wish..." her father said solemnly as he closed his eyes.
"Father....Mother...." Akia said softly while weeping. Then ambulance, the police
and the news reporters came. "Little girl, we're sorry......It's too late." the
policeman said as he took his hat off and kneeled down to Akia's height. Akia stared
into the policeman's eyes and yelled at him. "You could have come sooner! You could
have saved them! You could have......!" Akia yelled as she cried and punched the
policeman hard but it became soft punches. The news reporters started surronded Akia
and asking questions. "What happened? Who shot Mrs and Mr. Li? Answer us, Miss Akia
Li!" The news reporters screamed as they tried to pull on Akia's shoulder to make
Akia answer.


7 February 2009, 06:02 PM   #6
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Well i will be thinking of mine and it will be short or long, idk yet

7 February 2009, 06:10 PM   #7
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well it can be of anything

9 February 2009, 08:32 PM   #8
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hi i'm i in the group now  if i am i love to write so i'll be thinking

9 February 2009, 08:32 PM   #9
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i mean am i in the group 

9 February 2009, 08:46 PM   #10
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Last edited by ella2hip49, 9 February 2009
escape to canada .................................................(tell me if i should
write more chapters) (also if it talks wierd (the people)its cause thats how they talk

     another cold night massa charles hasent gave me warm clothes ma says its cause of the
color of our skin i don't know how that makes a diffrence thow me and ma had spent all day
in the fields picking cotton.we warent aloud to talk to each other or we get whipped i
have never before but ma has.i call it the death strap cause thats what happend to happend when i was 3 i  can still see the pain in his eyes and then pa died......
 but i remeber it soo clearly im 6 now.when the whip personne was looking away anoter
slave ranup to ma and told her something just then the horn blew and me and ma went to our
cabin were 15 other slaves lived. when we got inside ma looked at me in they eyes. hers
were  tearful then she told me a slave buyer was coming and i knew this would be the last
time i saw ma again.......................

  hope you liked it tell me what you think thx - ella

11 February 2009, 12:00 AM   #11
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okays here is mine.....
 I call it wowza story

I wake up at the crack of dawn and hit the shower. I got dressed and then looked at myself
closely in the mirror. I sighed. I looked in the medicine cabinet. Inside a small brown
leather bag was my makeup. I opened the makeup container and placed dark eye shadow on my
eye lid. When I was finished with that I examined myself. I still wasn’t satisfied. Then
there was a loud pounding at the door. It was my sister. She was standing outside the
bathroom door biting her bottom lip. She had to use the bathroom. She pounded on the door
again, I opened the door and stared at her. She then said “Hurry up! Who cares about
your dumb makeup, I need to use the bathroom!” She pushed me aside and slammed the
bathroom door behind her. I looked down at my feet and then I realized that I needed to
get my shoes on. I rushed up the stairs and grabbed a pair of red flats with a buckle in
the front. I slid them on my feet. I looked at the clock on the wall above the television.
It was 7:15. I grabbed my yellow sweater and my backpack. I rushed back downstairs. My mom
was at the computer like she always is every morning. I told her good morning and I gave
her a hug and a kiss goodbye. I stepped outside the door. I saw Amy one of my friends
walking to school. I walked over to her. We walked to school together. That was the the
only happy moment of my day.

11 February 2009, 09:25 PM   #12
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Last edited by ella2hip49, 11 February 2009
so well should we finish them i realy want to hear more of evreyones story i think there
real good 

11 February 2009, 09:43 PM   #13
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i think we should how bout you people

13 February 2009, 07:30 PM   #14
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 i think we should too do you guys like mine???? 

13 February 2009, 07:37 PM    #15
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well i do your cool

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