Jacklyn--N$109--Red Room--Chef--Chunin Rank Ninja
Joined: 5 Dec 2007
It was Christmas Eve, and Halianna was almost ready for bed. She just had to find her
bedtime teddy bear, Talia. She was made with the finest items for making a teddy bear-she
had cost $182. Halianna had everything in her room made with the finest items. Halianna
found Talia and snuggled into her silk-made bed. Halianna had forgotten, though, that
Christmas was the next day.
Halianna was on winter vacation, so she stayed in her room day in and day out. She had
her servant-Ms. Ashley Everson-bring in her food whenever she wanted some. She always
played with her toys and always wanted more-but, once she bought a new toy (usually the
newest toy released in the area where she lived), she never played with her old toys
anymore. Her room was filled with all the toys you could imagine.
Halianna went to sleep, and she dreamed of playing in the fields and picking flowers and
playing frisbee-which was EXACTLY what she hated. Halianna thought it was an ugly scene.
It went on and on until...Halianna woke up to her mother's call. "BREAKFAST HONEY! IT'S
9:00 AM!" her mother yelled. Halianna sighed and pulled on her clothes. She called Ms.
"Can you please get me my breakfast, Ms. Everson?" Halianna asked. Halianna still wanted
to stay inside her room.
"Sure, honey!" Ms. Everson answered. Halianna was used to Ms. Everson sounding sweet. She
liked it. Ms. Everson went downstairs and brought back a yummy bowl of Cocoa Puffs and
Cocoa Pebbles with chocolate milk. Halianna was used to her chocolatey breakfast. Halianna
smiled and thanked her servant. Ms. Everson nodded and went to Halianna's baby sister's
room to check on Holly, Halianna's baby sister.
Halianna smiled to herself after Ms. Everson left and was about to take a bite of her
chocolatey breakfast when she looked down on her spoon-and there was a piece of coal! She
set it back and tried to get no coal. She lifted up the spoon-and there was another piece
of coal! She put it back in the milk and used the spoon to get the top Cocoa Pebble. It
became coal! Halianna didn't feel so well. She tried again a few more times, but it kept
on coming up as coal.
After Halianna tried to get just milk and cereal in her spoon for the 23rd time, Halianna
put her bowl on her sky blue table. Halianna then took out her bag of pretzels. She
reached in and took out a pretzel. And Halianna almost ate a piece of coal! Halianna
looked into her bag of pretzels and looked at the pretzel she was going to pick up. She
reached in and pulled out the pretzel she was looking at, and it turned into coal! She
threw that piece of coal back into the bag. She had a stomachache.
Halianna recovered after a while. She decided to play with her newest toy-her Dora Mini
Automobile. "Let's go for a ride, Dora!" Halianna said as she picked up Dora and the
automobile. However, her hands turned into coal. And her toys-all of them. In fact, her
entire room turned into coal! Halianna was scared. She hoped that her older sister wasn't
tricking her. Halianna couldn't move that well because her hands were really heavy. She
yelled for help, but no one could hear her because the coal door and the coal walls
blocked out the sound.
Halianna was really exhausted from trying to lift up her hands, so she rested on the
ground. She was about to fall asleep when she was transported to an old, crooked house.
"You must crawl to the space 5 feet away from you within 3 minutes or you will see the
last of everything. GO!!" said a voice. Halianna wasn't ready. She tried to push her
hands, but it wasn't any good. Before she knew it, 3 minutes had passed by.And she had
only crawled 2 inches! "THIS IS YOUR LAST MOMENT BEFORE THE WORLD! YOU SHALL BE KILLED!"
Halianna was frightened. She fell asleep. She saw spirits rising from the ground, trying
to devour Halianna.
Halianna was scared and rushed her spirit to the northern caves. The polar bears near the
caves there tried to stamp on her. Halianna was squished after doging them. She was gone
forever. Hours and hours of seeing black space. It seemed to never end when...
Halianna woke up. She glanced at the calendar in her room. Christmas Day. She remembered
that yesterday was Christmas Eve. But, Halianna remembered her dream. She had died
already, didn't she? "BREAKFAST HONEY! IT'S 9:00 AM!" her mother yelled. Halianna pulled
on her clothes. She called Ms. Everson over.
"Can you please get me my breakfast?" Halianna asked Ms. Everson.
"Sure, honey!" Ms. Everson replied. She went downstairs and brought back Halianna's
chocolatey breakfast. Halianna thanked her servant and Ms. Everson nodded and went
downstairs to have her breakfast.
Halianna opened the present Ms. Everson left on the bed. There was a new cell phone for
her! Halianna was excited. she smiled.
Halianna waited a while after she opened her present. Then, she scooped up her cereal,
and there, in the spoon, was a lump of coal...
My story! Enjoy!