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24 October 2011, 01:51 AM   #1
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Last edited by ‹♥electrohouse♥›, 26 October 2011
Please write a detailed paragraph containing name, age, any mental problems, why they are here, and their history. I would prefer real pictures to anime. They make it more realistic.

24 October 2011, 10:02 PM   #2
Joined: 24 Oct 2011
Posts: 23
It helps me more to use an actual form, so if that's okay, I'm going to do that.


Name : Jane Whitewillow
Age : 19
Problems : She sees people. She doesn't see ghosts, but she actually sees people. They are
the closest thing to her to "Imaginary Friends", but at the end of the day, to her they
are real. She can touch them, feel them, see them, confide in them, but doesn't know that
they are only a pigment of her mind. She thinks everyone else is crazy because that they
cannot see them. Some are human, some are not. She's been injured by them a few times, but
that was self-inflicted, without her knowing. In these aspects she is out of her mind.
Why She Is Here : Well, one day she was in the park. She was having a loud, spirited fight
with one of them, and there were many people there, but they only saw a girl shouting at
the air. They brought out a knife, and tried to kill her. Every one saw Jane stick a knife
in herself, and then they called the police. The hospital saw that she had a history of
this, and she was even talking to them during her stay. She had no suicidal tendencies,
and when they asked her why she did it, she said "I didn't do it, Eliza did.". After that,
they said she was crazy.
Brief History (this will be very brief because that with me it's long or nothing) : Jane
always saw them. She wasn't rich, but she wasn't poor. As a child was when she first saw
them. Her father told her they did not exist and so she talked with them in private. All
her life they were there, and many times she was sent into the police before now, but most
of them weren't as obvious, and were only things being broken, yelling, and hitting people
at times. She, as she grew up, thought she was special. As she got older, and had more
mature thoughts, she thought that she was the only person sane in the world.
Personality : Despite being insane with these delusions, and doing whatever she could to
keep them real without her own knowledge, she's actually a good person, and if she didn't
have them, she would be a good kind, intelligent person, not in an insane asylum, maybe
funding one. 

Was that good, or was it too unrealistic? I'll resize the picture, of course.
Jane Whitewillow / 19 years / Sees people / Insane, but does not think she is

Anya Rose / 18 years / Can read minds / Not insane

25 October 2011, 12:21 AM   #3
Joined: 24 Oct 2011
Posts: 23
Oh dear, I wonder how I'm going to fit that into a paragraph ;-;
Jane Whitewillow / 19 years / Sees people / Insane, but does not think she is

Anya Rose / 18 years / Can read minds / Not insane

25 October 2011, 12:35 AM   #4
Joined: 24 Oct 2011
Posts: 23
Last edited by SoftLikeSilk, 25 October 2011
I think I can do that, I never thought of doing it in first person.

--Character--

My name is Jane Whitewillow. I'm 19 years old, and I've just been sent to an insane
asylum. It was a mistake, trust me, because I'm not insane. I know why they think of me as
such though...I have always been able to see people and things that other people couldn't.
When I was just a little girl I started to see them. My father, no matter how many times I
said it, always patted me head, did what he thought was playing along, or told me that
they weren't real. I didn't accept this. I was special. What a naive thought. I was not
and am not special - I'm just the only sane person. Well, me and them, of course. As I
grew up, I knew these things. I started to treat them as my life, and although my father
didn't like it, I didn't really care. I'm not going to lie, I did some bad things with or
for them, and many firsts were with them. I could name them all, but there are a lot of
them. Most recently, I got in a fight with Eliza. I don't really remember what it was
about, because that it all becomes hazy when I try to think about it, but she ended up
stabbing me. I woke up a few days later (or so they told me) at the hospital nearest by.
Eliza came by and apologized, as did Mark, and was confused about what it was about. When
the doctors came in, yet again, they didn't see them. The first question they asked me was
about the incident. "Why did you do it? Why did you stab yourself? You don't have suicidal
tendencies, and only minor things with you have ever happened before!" When I replied
without second thought that Eliza did it, they sent me to this place. An Insane Asylum.
For a girl who just isn't insane.
--End--

I enjoyed doing this, I probably could've done it a bit better though, I think.
Jane Whitewillow / 19 years / Sees people / Insane, but does not think she is

Anya Rose / 18 years / Can read minds / Not insane

26 October 2011, 02:21 AM   #5
Joined: 24 Oct 2011
Posts: 23
I don't know if this means I'm accepted?
Jane Whitewillow / 19 years / Sees people / Insane, but does not think she is

Anya Rose / 18 years / Can read minds / Not insane

26 October 2011, 02:46 AM   #6
Joined: 24 Oct 2011
Posts: 23
Mkay. I'm going to make another character.

--Character--

Her name is Anya Rose, and she is 18 years old. She can read minds, and sometimes has
brief visions of the future. She isn't crazy - she actually can. It started when she was
very young. Her family wasn't the best. None of them were good, and all of them were bad.
Before she heard it, she always thought that her family was perfect, and there were no
problems. Her mother, father, and brother made sure she stayed like this. When she was 10,
it first happened. She couldn't sleep that night, and had walked out of her room. At the
door, she heard her mother's voice. She was talking about some guy that she had met. When
she walked in her father was asleep, and her mother was still talking. When she saw her,
the talking continued even though she said "Hi, sweetie" over top of it. Sometimes she'd
ask her family members about it, and after a while, they knew that she was getting their
secrets. When her brother moved out, things got worse. Now that she could do it more
frequently and adquately, she picked up everything. Her father locked her in her room when
she wasn't at school or eating. Her mother always told her father that she was talking
crazy, and her father always made up something she had done wrong. After a while, they
finally divorced, but Anya still knew these things. They devised a plan. "We're going to
send you to a... boarding school." they said. Happy that they had paid attention to her
for the first time in a long time, she bought into it. They said that they would all still
get together as a family on holidays, and that she would enjoy it. And so now she's here,
and she doesn't know why. 
--End--
I liked making her even more :D
Jane Whitewillow / 19 years / Sees people / Insane, but does not think she is

Anya Rose / 18 years / Can read minds / Not insane

26 October 2011, 10:13 PM   #7
The Founder
Joined: 19 Mar 2011
Posts: 378
Everyone is accepted. And I would prefer real pictures to anime, please. Mackie, I said
you can help me remake my club, not manipulate it. It is still my club.
Aislin Spencer/16 Sean Smith/16

26 October 2011, 11:19 PM   #8
Joined: 24 Oct 2011
Posts: 23
I f'ing hate using real pictures. I don't mind other people using them, but still...
with that in mind, may I continue to use anime ones?
Jane Whitewillow / 19 years / Sees people / Insane, but does not think she is

Anya Rose / 18 years / Can read minds / Not insane

31 October 2011, 08:32 PM   #9
The Founder
Joined: 19 Mar 2011
Posts: 378
Yes, you may. I just prefer real pictures, but if you prefer it that way it is fine.
Mackie, can you make your picture smaller?
Aislin Spencer/16 Sean Smith/16

31 October 2011, 09:39 PM   #10
Joined: 24 Oct 2011
Posts: 23
Mkay. I'll try to use real pictures from here on out.
Jane Whitewillow / 19 years / Sees people / Insane, but does not think she is

Anya Rose / 18 years / Can read minds / Not insane

2 November 2011, 08:48 PM   #11
Joined: 22 Mar 2011
Posts: 52
Is it possible for me to just keep my characters from before the restart?
Noah and Oliver...17....twins "We dont love eachother, but the best entertainment is someone who shares your same jeans...." Willow McCarthy......17....male "things are not allways as they seem"

2 November 2011, 11:55 PM   #12
The Founder
Joined: 19 Mar 2011
Posts: 378
Yeah, that's completely fine.
Aislin Spencer/16 Sean Smith/16

2 November 2011, 11:56 PM   #13
Joined: 24 Oct 2011
Posts: 23
hermm... contemplating making a boy....
Jane Whitewillow / 19 years / Sees people / Insane, but does not think she is

Anya Rose / 18 years / Can read minds / Not insane

3 November 2011, 12:00 AM   #14
The Founder
Joined: 19 Mar 2011
Posts: 378
Probably a good idea!
Aislin Spencer/16 Sean Smith/16

3 November 2011, 12:34 AM    #15
Joined: 24 Oct 2011
Posts: 23
Last edited by SoftLikeSilk, 3 November 2011
The picture is of D'artagnon from three musketeers 8D (although that isn't him on the
pretty balck horse)

His name was Carlos. He was a slave to a very rich man who 'adopted' him to make him his
slave. This mans name was Danarius. Danarius was a cruel master, and Carlos was a
prankster as a child. As he got older, he was more spiteful, independant, and downright
cocky to his master. Since he was an orphan and Danarius adopted him, though, he was in
all technicallity his child. So one day he played a trick. When Carlos tried to fell him
in battle, he fell quite easily, and called the poilce that his son hadc gone insane and
tried to hurt his father. This wasn't true- Danarius was abusive, and had done much worse
to the boy, but there was no way of knowing that, even when he showed them his scars from
the many beatings. To get rid of him, since the police didn't think it was true and
Danarius bugged them about it to no end, they chucked the poor teenager here. 
Age 17.

Note that I used a real picture for your majesty the queen so you would not be burdened by
more anime ones :D
Jane Whitewillow / 19 years / Sees people / Insane, but does not think she is

Anya Rose / 18 years / Can read minds / Not insane

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