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Suicide Temptaion :(

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17 August 2010, 07:29 PM   #1
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My skin burns
My Mind Churns

Right and wrong
I've done right for so long

My hands are shaking
No more faking

My escape in front of me
my razor blade, my life key

Should I?,Should I Not?
Do the one thing i have always fought

Slide the blade against me skin,
and embrace in the joyful sin?

18 August 2010, 02:00 PM   #2
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dont... do suicide stuff man

18 August 2010, 03:30 PM   #3
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I like it. It shows true emotion as well as an indecisive choice over whether or not to
take your life.

18 August 2010, 10:11 PM   #4
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thanks; i am glad it wa exactly how i felt at that glad you could

18 August 2010, 11:52 PM   #5
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this is a lovely poem the short lines give it a shaky feel with indecisiveness it's quite pretty(:

19 August 2010, 03:40 AM    #6
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thanks alot 

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