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8 January 2010, 07:25 AM   #1
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Well this is a little bit of my story since im not gonna write it all for u to see
everything with the suspense! kay ill start ._.

       I looked into David's black ''button'' eyes. His eyes looked at me too. I searched
his face and noticed his familiar figure from childhood. David noticed my searching
"Well I thought your not suppose to talk to me,"He finally said.
David then held my hand tightly and stared into my eyes without a blink. His black button
eyes made me shake.
''Your scaring me!"I yelled."STOP!"
David calmly started to depart from my hand. 
"Let's run together!"David commanded."Go away from this town!"
I saw David's excited look. I hated his cute stare that keeps people persuaded until they
said yes.
"Y-your crazy!"I yelled and pushed away from David's hold.
I ran away from him and cried wondering.

18 January 2010, 07:54 PM   #2
Joined: 9 Jun 2008
Posts: 669
It sounds pretty good even though I don't know a thing about this story.

Keep writing!!

21 January 2010, 05:20 PM    #3
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thanx! i just wrote this little thing i thought of

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