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15 March 2007, 12:16 AM   #1
Joined: 14 Mar 2007
Posts: 8
umm ineed help with my poem  well i ahev finished it but i need to know what ppl think
ouf it!! can u heelp me!!!

15 March 2007, 08:04 PM   #2
lonely and sad as love passes me by
Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 112
yeah sure were is it

18 March 2007, 12:12 AM   #3
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i got lots of poems i wrote

18 March 2007, 12:14 AM   #4
lonely and sad as love passes me by
Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 112
u do maybe u can put on here i'll add to

18 March 2007, 03:49 PM   #5
Joined: 18 Mar 2007
Posts: 2
I have a whole book a poems I have written I just have to find it first lol
Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most. 
    My ancestors wandered lost in the wilderness for 40 years because even in biblical times, men
would not stop to ask for directions. 
   Women speak because they wish to speak, whereas a man speaks only when driven to speech by
something outside himself -- like, for instance, he can't find any clean socks. 
    In view of the fact that God limited the intelligence of man, it seems unfair that he did not
also limit his stupidity

18 March 2007, 04:10 PM   #6
lonely and sad as love passes me by
Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 112
ok thats great

22 March 2007, 08:54 PM   #7
Joined: 14 Mar 2007
Posts: 8
okay here it is

The child cries day in and day out,
And still to be , her sister, I never show a pout;
Her sorrow goes in me and still- I am okay
But sometimes I wonder how long her sobbin will stay

23 March 2007, 03:08 PM   #8
Joined: 14 Mar 2007
Posts: 8
sobbing***

23 March 2007, 07:52 PM   #9
lonely and sad as love passes me by
Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 112
Last edited by lonely, 6 April 2007
those 2 are good one write more

24 March 2007, 12:32 AM   #10
Joined: 14 Mar 2007
Posts: 8
can you help me write them because i am not ther greatest poet lol and i do need a
friends help of comfort

16 April 2007, 09:29 PM    #11
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that is a nice poem



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