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Lovesick over a set of Scales


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22 June 2010, 12:22 AM   #1
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 In a far away ocean in the middle of nowhere, lies a girl sitting on the rocks,
smiling as the waves lap against her feet. Wait, those aren't feet, those are scales, from
her waist down! Oh I had better warn the boy who's stalking up to her, a goofy grin on his
face. He's love sick for sure. Oh, now that smiling girl has dropped into the water, only
her head sticking up. And that love sick boy is talking to her now. Where will this tale
lead to?

22 June 2010, 12:23 AM   #2
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It's all...mysterious...
I like it!
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22 June 2010, 12:50 AM   #3
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It's all...mysterious...
I like it!

22 June 2010, 12:50 AM   #4
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Thanks, that's what I was going for.

22 June 2010, 06:49 PM   #5
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[Somebody doesn't know how to think for herself.]
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22 June 2010, 06:53 PM   #6
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Kinda random, but do any of you have a devinart account?

22 June 2010, 07:03 PM   #7
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Nope...
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29 June 2010, 12:01 AM   #8
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First chapter.

 You see, our town didn't used to be so magical, it was full of country folk on a
sea side, plain and ordinary. Untill this new girl shows up, flaming head of hair going
down to her back and these emerald eyes that are undescribable. She was irresistable to
all, all but me. I knew better, knew somethign was fishy about the lad, but I never
thought she was a fish! Mermaid more like it, according ot my studies, but still she
didn't belong here with us good people.I knew she was a mermaid 'cause One day wen I was
out gathering fish I saw her pop her head up out of nowhere. She looked around and did a
flip in the air. That's when I noticed the tail.

 It was a green shade, just as her eyes. Her smiled was full of adrinaline, and I couldn't
believe my eyes that she was a mermaid. I fished out a camera and just as I was about to
snap a picture, she hurled herself deep into the water. I stayed in the ocean countless
hours that day and night, trying to find her. Finaly, I turned the boat around in the
direction of the cove, thinking I was partailly insane and that's when I saw her. It was
sunset and the scales on her tail were glinting. She was resting up on the rocks, her eyes
closed. I saw a boy heading towards her, not noticing the tail. Oh, I'd better warn that
boy with the goofy grin on his face. He looks like he's fallen in love at first sight!
Now, what's that mermaid girl doing! She's hopped back in the water, so he can't see her
tail. They talk for a while and she blushes as he walks off like a love isck puppy. Where
will this fairytal end up going?

29 June 2010, 12:09 AM   #9
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It's really good, keep it up!
(Oh and please read my story, Change.)
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29 June 2010, 12:15 AM   #10
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Have been your stories amazing!

29 June 2010, 12:16 AM   #11
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Oh lol well thanks!
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29 June 2010, 12:21 AM   #12
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Your welcome.

8 July 2010, 07:18 PM    #13
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Second Chapter

  It's been a week now, since I saw them too talking and you can tell that boys
smitten over that fish hard. Fish isn't really suitable anymore, since I researched it a
bit and she's a mermaid. A mermaid! In this plain, ordinary, island we got a mermaid! I
want her out. Too mysterious for this town of good folk who don't have scales! I'm
surprised I'm the only one who knows. I'm going to tell everyone about her someday, might
even catch her and show her to people for tons of money. That'd be dandy, me having tons
of money, for buying riches and such. Just dandy.

Gotta go! I'll write the continuation when I get back.



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