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16 December 2009, 08:57 PM   #1
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Last edited by Manderlinaa, 19 December 2009
My friends have seen this already and they say I'll be famous for it,that its my BEST
work.Comment?I just wrote it.


Cry quietly,my darling,
for everyone is asleep.
Cry quietly my dearest,
if you must weep.
No-one may hear you,
nor see your tears,
for nobody else knows
about those secret years.
Though all you love have gone
and hope has been led astray,
cry quietly,my child,
wipe your tears away.

16 December 2009, 10:43 PM   #2
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its very touching. I actually think some of your other poems are richer and deeper. This
one is a bit simple though it is nice in its simplicity.

17 December 2009, 01:42 AM   #3
Joined: 22 Jun 2009
Posts: 32
Cry quietly,my darling, for everyone is asleep. Cry quietly my dearest, if you must weep.
i like that quote . it's very relate-able .
oh so insane . ♥

19 December 2009, 02:59 PM    #4
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Joined: 15 Jul 2009
Posts: 51
Thank you..Shall i post my friends comments??
I will. Here they are:
Sam,I hope you know,I KNOW this is your best one yet.This is something that caught my
attention from the first line.It expresses how I've felt for years and unfortunately still
feel....A question for you though-what does this piece mean to you,my dear?-Raven



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