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1 August 2009, 05:57 AM   #1
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 14


I know, her arms are to thin, and her hands aren't big enough. D:
crit?

1 August 2009, 06:08 AM   #2
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Last edited by ‹??????›, 1 August 2009
It's so pretty! I like the different tones of blue hearts in the background; it gives it a light to dark concept. ♥ Her chest is too high, I guess? The cloth looks fine to me, maybe a little wrinkly. Or is it me? I don't think she looks funny, it's very adorable. ^ ^

1 August 2009, 03:34 PM   #3
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Last edited by Danielle10, 1 August 2009
The eyebrows are hard to see. Well, the background is adorable. As Yanely said, chest is
too high.

1 August 2009, 06:05 PM   #4
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 112
The head seems a tad bit big for her body. According to the arm length, the legs should
be longer and thicker than that. But I love the hair and wings. :D :D 
Good job 
To love and be loved
To the point of going mad
The sweet and burning kiss is
IMITATION
Senses numbing
Consciousness fading away
The overflowing emotions and
Reality
Are painted over in black
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1 August 2009, 06:30 PM    #5
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Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 124
Last edited by Kyun_yo, 1 August 2009
The perspective is kind of off... 

It's strange how her legs are positioned, and her feet doesn't really clarify what she's
doing. Is she sitting on her legs, kneeling, or flying in midair?  xD Uhm... if she's on
her legs, I suggest you don't give her such a long thigh. If there's long thighs, than
it's obvious that in the viewer's perspective she is looking up. 

But if you weren't aiming for her to be sitting on her legs, but instead kneeling, than
all you need to do is adjust the foot to make it seem as though it is on ground. 


But aside from that, I really like how you colored it. =D And the blue and white theme to
it is really cool. You did an awesome job. =D



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