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WRITING: Poetry: Unfinished Business

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20 July 2009, 03:11 PM   #1
Joined: 11 Mar 2009
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(there may be a revision later, more to this)

All the bridges are burning that we might have used

I see you walking away and I'm left here confused

I don't know why we couldn't work our shit out

The truth that was certain is now just riddled with doubt

I know that I loved you and you whispered it too

So who was buying in? And who was fooling who?

You said you have to go and the cost would be high

But you didn't seem affected when you made your goodbye

Now here I am in pieces and I'll be damned if I cry

I'm not going to run and chase you or beg you to try

Sometimes even the good things that have no reason to die

Just change because they have to like the turning of tides

I know I'll think about you and how we were so close

I'm pretty sure it will be the long talks I'll miss most

And hearing your funny laughter and your sweet tender thoughts

And the times we were left sweating when we both had got hot

It's hard to imagine that its all come to an end

And it seems you don't even want to return to Just Friends

Well we have unfinished business but I won't fight as you go

I doubt that this means anything, I just wanted you to know.


20 July 2009, 04:42 PM   #2
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it's really good eddie.

20 July 2009, 06:27 PM   #3
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deep =/
worded perfectly.

20 July 2009, 08:13 PM   #4
Joined: 11 Mar 2009
Posts: 212
im not happy with this at all actually.............its completely wrong ><

22 July 2009, 12:05 PM    #5
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Shut up Eddie (: It's incredible . I love your rhyming . It doesn't fail . :D

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