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19 July 2009, 03:53 PM   #1
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Last edited by ColorfulOrgasmicFuckingDinosaur, 20 July 2009


;3;
Kay, here is what i know.
I need much more practise on the hands.
The part where, the stick is supposed to be hold... it's not really being hold.. like it's
floating behind her hand. 
I didn't notice that untill now. 

So well...
Go ahead. C:

19 July 2009, 04:16 PM   #2
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I absolutly love this and it's colors.
Shading and dodging is awesome too.
The only issue is her left arm. It looks a little short for her body.
But thats pretty much it for me.

20 July 2009, 07:47 AM   #3
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So beautiful, indeed. I love the different eye colors that go with the clothings'. My eye
went straight to look at the hair. It stands out so much, and well shaded!♥ The neck
seems too much to her right. . other than that, very good. The shading's splendid, and
nice choice of colors.

20 July 2009, 11:06 AM   #4
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Posts: 112
Last edited by lollylovex3, 20 July 2009
THAT'S GORGEOUS. I love your style. The coloring and the clothing is wonderful. 
But the anatomy is really bothering me. The hands are way too small for her. The hand
should be double the size of the one that you've drawn. I did a redline thingy, if you
don't mind :P 
(I know my anatomy isn't the best either. But I think it should help a bit. karolinacake
can probably do a much better redline OTL)

What art program do you use? Or was it an oekaki? The lines are a bit squiggly, so use
swifter lines. :D
Buuut, I really love it 
To love and be loved
To the point of going mad
The sweet and burning kiss is
IMITATION
Senses numbing
Consciousness fading away
The overflowing emotions and
Reality
Are painted over in black
-IMITATION BLACK

20 July 2009, 01:34 PM   #5
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Last edited by ColorfulOrgasmicFuckingDinosaur, 20 July 2009
I used, Erhm... Opencanvas.
It's a trial, and this was my first drawing on it. >w<;

Yeah anatomy isn't my strongest point, neither are hands.
But twice as big? :0

About her left arm.
In your redline, i feel like it's slightly too long then. 
But indeed, mine is too short. 

Her Neck!
I didn't even notice that. 
Now that you say it, yes it's too much to the left x'D;;

Haha thankyou <3

20 July 2009, 02:43 PM   #6
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Yeah, the other people said what I was gonna say. But the good things: 
the shading is great~
the outline is good~keep it up!

Erum, but the body shape needs help so yeah ^^;

20 July 2009, 03:53 PM   #7
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 112
Yeh, I realized that. Sorry. :P 
And hands are in fact pretty big! I think it's better for the hands to be big than for
them to be small. It doesn't look as awkward that way.
To love and be loved
To the point of going mad
The sweet and burning kiss is
IMITATION
Senses numbing
Consciousness fading away
The overflowing emotions and
Reality
Are painted over in black
-IMITATION BLACK

20 July 2009, 08:28 PM   #8
Joined: 19 Jul 2009
Posts: 20
 The left line on her cheek is a bit curved. Maybe straighten that a bit? :3 This
is really cuteeeee *u*

21 July 2009, 12:04 AM   #9
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Okay, first off I wanna say, 
YOU COLOR SO NICELYYYY *A*
Like her hair and skin is just awesome dude.
And I really like dem thighs. :33

But anyways, I also made you a redline (Lolly, yours is really good too! :D )
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I put two versions, because it's a little hard to see the first one. :o
There obviously are quite a few problems with this, but you're doing really good,
so don't get discouraged or anything!

First off the right arm is like almost falling off her body completely, so you'll want
to push it back onto her shoulder, the neck is also really far off to the left like
other people said, but also it's a bit thick. Especially for like anime style where
girls usually have really thin necks.
The chin is too pointy and her head is really too big. I had to scale it down twice :O
Also I agree with lolly that you usually cant go wrong with making hands bigger.
Like even if they're too big it's defiantly better than being too small.
Remember hands should be about the size of your face!
And sorry the hand I drew for you isn't too great, I don't really know how to draw them
like that D:
But I'll try to find you a reference!

Sorry if that sounded mean at all! I hope it didn't but yeah D:
You're on the right trackkkkk~
<3

21 July 2009, 12:21 AM   #10
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Ahh this is like the only good reference I can find. 
But it might help D:
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21 July 2009, 05:46 AM   #11
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Posts: 112
I knew karolinacake's redline would be sooo much better than mine o3o
To love and be loved
To the point of going mad
The sweet and burning kiss is
IMITATION
Senses numbing
Consciousness fading away
The overflowing emotions and
Reality
Are painted over in black
-IMITATION BLACK

21 July 2009, 06:13 AM   #12
Joined: 19 Jul 2009
Posts: 20
coughwonderwhycough.

21 July 2009, 06:24 AM   #13
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aww lolly, yours was still really good :D

(shae, be nice. >:3 )

21 July 2009, 06:26 AM   #14
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 112
OTL. My anatomy is crappy.

(Lolz XD)
To love and be loved
To the point of going mad
The sweet and burning kiss is
IMITATION
Senses numbing
Consciousness fading away
The overflowing emotions and
Reality
Are painted over in black
-IMITATION BLACK

21 July 2009, 09:57 PM    #15
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I tend to make the hair waaaay too poofy, which makes her head look big. XD;;

Lolol, Thankyou so much, >w<;
I'm deffinatly paying more attention to those points, when i'm drawing again. C:

In your redline, her body is totally facing forwards.
I actually meant to. but failed. to make it turn slightly to the left  xD;;


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