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18 July 2009, 06:43 PM   #1
Joined: 11 Jul 2009
Posts: 17
Lupita said I should put Derrick up here. He's my male self.... BUT WITH COOLER HAIR. And he cross dresses. He doesn't look like a he. 8D CRITISIZE TO THE MAX. >:I
Couriousity Killed The Cat. But Since When Were We Cats? Ohyeah. I came up with that. ♥

18 July 2009, 06:48 PM   #2
Joined: 14 Jul 2009
Posts: 39
I really like this picture :D I think maaaybe you should make the hips show ou- wait
nevermind I forgot it's a he @_x.... Anyhow,IF you wanted to give him some guy
features then I think you should make his eyebrows thicker or his top eye lid much
thinner,buut I don't know if you meant to do that on purpose or not. I like the red and
black stripe shirt(it gives him a punk look) and the eyes are pretty!

18 July 2009, 07:23 PM   #3
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Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 124
Guys don't have curves. They have straight bodies, so that's a big mistake over there.
You should have made the torso and chest longer, and defined hips don't really help that
much. ._o Also they don't have thick eyelashes (unless they have mascara) and large,
circular eyes. You could have a guy with big eyes, however the way you draw the lid makes
all the difference. Shoulders should be broader and not curved at all if it is a guy. It'd
also help if you give the guy a somewhat kind of flat chin, then again, the guys I draw
don't have them cus I suck, so whatever. 

Hope this helped you. 


18 July 2009, 07:34 PM   #4
Joined: 11 Jul 2009
Posts: 17
@Lupita- Pfft. Yeah. But he's meant to be girly like. xD Punk is the SMEX.

@Kyun- I'm quite aware of that. That's why I fail at guys because I'm bad at doing those
things. x] But Derrick's an Uke, and is my 'twin' so he's quite lady-like. I need to
follow your critisizm on more manly things though. xD Thank you!
Couriousity Killed The Cat. But Since When Were We Cats? Ohyeah. I came up with that. ♥

18 July 2009, 07:39 PM   #5
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 110
i agree with earlier posts, but i love how you drew and colored it in so succesfully (is
that pencil!??) and it still looks so clean.
i think what we can see of the leg  to our left should be pulled back some; if you follow
the angle, it looks like you might need wider hips to accept the thigh.

you're male self is nice ;D
'a rose by any other name still draws blood'

18 July 2009, 07:42 PM    #6
Joined: 11 Jul 2009
Posts: 17
Yes. It's colored pencils and drawn with a pencil. Actually, about the leg, yeah I
noticed that and should've changed that also, but this picture was a bit back then so I
was easily satisfyied. xD

Ohreally? C: Thank you. <3
Couriousity Killed The Cat. But Since When Were We Cats? Ohyeah. I came up with that. ♥

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