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Writing:Poetry:Scarred(Mature content warning)

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9 May 2010, 08:33 PM   #1
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Okay,i wrote this a little while ago and it's kinda mature.It says the word hell once and
its got some non child friendly material in it,so i'm just giving a general warning.

Have you ever contemplated suicide while crying in your room?
I have.
Have you ever made a plan to die but never followed through?
I have.
Have you ever cut yourself,trying to escape?
I have.
Have you ever been so numb you couldn't feel the pain?
I have.
have you ever cried yourself to sleep thinking that no one cares?
I have.
have you ever wondered who would notice if one day you weren't there?
I have.
have you ever packed a bag planning to run away?
I have.
Have you ever decided to stay?
I have.
Have you ever been through hell?
I have.
Have you ever gotten yourself some help?
I have.

9 May 2010, 09:02 PM   #2
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everything but the last one (: this was ahmazing , honey ♥

19 May 2010, 12:21 AM   #3
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I loved it. I don't think the last one flows as well though. Other than that, it was

19 May 2010, 08:44 AM   #4
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it was brilliant.

29 May 2010, 02:40 PM   #5
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That was truley incredable!
I love how i felt the last words at the end of each statement 'I Have'
Its rly neat!

29 May 2010, 02:54 PM    #6
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Work on the ending a bit. Make it a cliffhanger or something that will make people think.

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