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2 March 2010, 08:16 PM   #1
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Shallow empty lies left for a fool to read
Because these empty shadows are read only by fools.
I wonder if sanctuary ever extends to the worthy?
Because all I've seen is cold hard ignorance.
I wonder if its possible to lift the darkest demon  to salvation
and i wonder if you they will ever see their acidic world for what it really is:
Poison; Hate filled, Depressing.

I Hope you realize damnation is not cold icy death its self, 
but the endless coal-walk resembling life.
and the only heaven we will ever see; 
is only the one moment when the numbness leaves you,
 making you feel alive.

Slip away like frigid smoke from an ember,
 Invisible, Intangible, Inadequate.
You savages are encrypted to all, 
except those who speak the tongue.

3 March 2010, 10:01 PM   #2
Joined: 30 Jan 2010
Posts: 32
Greatest and most interesting poem I have ever read I can actually understand it too.Very
nice, actually simple words can't describe this.

3 March 2010, 10:44 PM   #3
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Thanks a ton. (:

8 March 2010, 09:02 PM    #4
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it's deep, you can trust me on that.
and it's better than any of the ones I make.
the meaning is beautifully hidden, (well, not really, but it's not direct, either.) and
it's pretty, omg.
really great.
I like it, loads.
great metaphors, similes, whatever you call it.
terms aren't my thing ;-;

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