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Why I love you song/poem

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27 March 2010, 01:41 AM   #1
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Last edited by ‹☮SmileyPeanut☮›, 28 March 2010
I was so sad and slow
and I cried and cried and cried
with my head down so very low 
when my heart had been broken, I thought I had died,
'till I met you.
You came right up to me and 
you showed me that you cared
then you held me very tight and
 you told me not to worry,
you wiped off all my tears,
I'd fell in love again and I wasn't sorry
Then I had no more fears

 I became so very glad
So happy I could sing
with you at my side I'd never be sad,
I knew I could conqure any-thing
You love me so very much 
and i love you

So that's how it stayed,
just you and me for so very long
My broken heart began to fade
and when things had gone wrong,
i just came to you 
and you came to me
And that's why I love you

It's not true, but it was the best i could do. Hope you like it! Plz Coment!
I edited it so it rhymes!

28 March 2010, 02:21 PM   #2
Joined: 9 Jun 2008
Posts: 669
When you start to rhyme, you have to stick with it.

Otherwise than that I thought it was pretty good.

28 March 2010, 07:46 PM    #3
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oh, sorry. I'll fix it. 

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