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9 August 2009, 03:45 AM   #1
Joined: 9 Aug 2009
Posts: 5


I don't see much wrong with it, other than the fact that I can't color.

Crits please?

9 August 2009, 03:55 AM   #2
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 110
ummm...

ah....
it's great but...

yuou want me to crit!??!?


............ummm.... ok, what's that on her head...?
'a rose by any other name still draws blood'

9 August 2009, 03:56 AM   #3
Joined: 4 Aug 2009
Posts: 63
 Hmmmm, I'd say make the neck a little thinner, and the necklace a tiiiiiiiiiny
but less thin, because it's the only thin line, and it looks funny to me

>w< this is really cuuuute
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Mmmmmyes.

9 August 2009, 04:01 AM   #4
Joined: 4 Aug 2009
Posts: 63
ummm... ah.... it's great but... yuou want me to crit!??!? ............ummm.... ok, what's that on her head...?
Headphones!
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Mmmmmyes.

9 August 2009, 04:10 AM   #5
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 110
in that case...

i can only find what the other person found x.x
'a rose by any other name still draws blood'

9 August 2009, 06:26 AM   #6
Joined: 20 Jul 2009
Posts: 128
I don't know, i guess..
To me i think the left leg is to small or it could just be the right leg is infront or
something..
and uh.. I think the skirt looks kinda weird.
Besides that i think its awsome!

=D Goob job , as cute as a button! lol

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9 August 2009, 08:05 AM   #7
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DAMN IT'S TOO CUTE O_O

anyways. crits.. =_="
-the back part of her head. [i mean the skin part after the neck]
that part is supposed to be covered by hair. [sounds too picky? but im only
telling the truth.] hair grows out of that part of the head. thats why. 
-from the note above this one. it only means you have to even up the head
just a teenee bit more.
-her hair on the right side is kinda... a bit too airy ^^;
-its just evening out then its done :
[try imagining that chibi w/o clothes.  im not telling you to be a perv 
xD
, from there you can see the uneven parts.]

well you get it. over all this is awesome :D

9 August 2009, 08:27 AM   #8
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 112
Adorable, adorable, adorable. I can't critic on this!!
To love and be loved
To the point of going mad
The sweet and burning kiss is
IMITATION
Senses numbing
Consciousness fading away
The overflowing emotions and
Reality
Are painted over in black
-IMITATION BLACK

9 August 2009, 08:12 PM   #9
Joined: 9 Aug 2009
Posts: 5
@Pea: Yes, that's true.
@Joker:Hmmm...Yup.
@Nekoo: Yeah, the head part really bugged me. As well as the hair.
@lolly: Thank you very much!

13 August 2009, 04:48 PM    #10
Joined: 7 Aug 2009
Posts: 33
OMG I LOVE THIS! X3 ITS SO KAWAII!!!!! <3 XXX



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