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Oekaki: Kumo and Rin~ Chibis


8 August 2009, 06:38 PM   #1
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So, what'd you think?
Crits?
It's a chibi. LOL
I know it's fat, no nose and head shape is weird.

OH DANG. It's jpeg? That. Just. Sucks.

8 August 2009, 06:46 PM   #2
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That so cute! I love the background <3
Also I feel the faces are sooo sweet!! <3
I love the way the cheeks are shaded =]

Though i think that the heads are rather squished even for Chibi's, So next time don't
worry about getting the hat in . =D
Also the hands on the left girl are rather small,
I think we just have to work on shading you oekaki :3

Well done this is awesomeness!! :D

8 August 2009, 06:50 PM   #3
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Thank you~!

Yeah, I didn't have enough space. If it was photoshop, it would look better!

And shading, I didn't want to do that. Too lazy to. I used like 2 hours on this in total.
-__-

8 August 2009, 06:55 PM   #4
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 110
I know what she means about the shading  It's really hard to shade something that's
BLACK.

besides what has already been said, i think the hair doesn't curl around her arm that
way... when i had long hair, it never did that xD

 I loooove the picture though
'a rose by any other name still draws blood'

8 August 2009, 06:56 PM   #5
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besides what has already been said, i think the hair doesn't curl around her arm that way... when i had long hair, it never did that xD
Well, anything can happen in Chibi land. xD
It's really hard to shade something that's BLACK.
Actually, I can shade black. Just not enough time. ^U^'

8 August 2009, 06:57 PM   #6
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 110
Last edited by lunasan, 8 August 2009
hard, but not imposible xD

i know how it's done, however it is harder then other colors as it is so dark.
'a rose by any other name still draws blood'

8 August 2009, 07:00 PM   #7
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You just need to make the base color a bit more light and the shading color...black.

8 August 2009, 07:27 PM   #8
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Dude, no offense, but you should accept some of this critique.
It just sounds like you keep defending yourself.
Not to be mean, but if you could have done better, than you should have!
We're all trying to improve here~

8 August 2009, 07:31 PM    #9
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I'm too lazy to shade and stuff. xP
I did take crits, lol.



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