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WRITING: Poetry: Semi-Erotic: Mess


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15 May 2009, 01:00 AM   #1
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Posts: 28
Last edited by ‹In♥His♥Shadow›, 15 May 2009
Mess

You're a whirlwind,
and I screamed your name;
am I your equal?
I've given myself away.
But I wonder if you noticed
that I was born;
Born to be branded by you.
Oh, burn me.
My bosom pulses
and skips beats
and I will die-
I will die if your
body isn't with me now.
We will find our waterfall,
you will bite at my neck,
I will lick at your ear.
Would you like to hear your name?
Leave it to me, my lips will
slide across, savor,
moisten the word.
My tongue will lap up every bit
of this moment.
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This is scary. o_O But hormones are a teens biggest.. uhm... fantasy generator. These are
the days were I wish I was older. >_>;
Po-e-try makes me happyyyy.

15 May 2009, 11:51 AM   #2
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i like poems that are free verse most... they're less restrictive... to write and read
sometimes... i think its realli good by the way...

15 May 2009, 08:36 PM   #3
Joined: 21 Mar 2009
Posts: 22
Last edited by mextreehugger, 16 May 2009
Um . If you think it's scary why would you write it ? EDIT : I love your signature . I'm sure I've said this before . But I do . (: & I did like this poem , as a side note . Sexay .
x Each night I wish upon a star I'll run and run , oh so far . To get away from this normal place To hide the pain of your taken face . x </3

15 May 2009, 08:52 PM   #4
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Joined: 11 Mar 2009
Posts: 212
its is pretty nice and theres that tension inside.

you know i heard the French call an orgasm..."the little death"

17 May 2009, 02:48 AM    #5
Joined: 21 Mar 2009
Posts: 28
Thanks peli can!
Um . If you think it's scary why would you write it ?
I just wrote what I was feeling. XD Then I realized what I was feeling was just plain messed up. :P Thanks Eddie! Everyone used to say that, and I was so clueless as to what it meant. XD
Po-e-try makes me happyyyy.


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