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3 May 2010, 07:44 PM   #1
Joined: 14 Mar 2010
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Last edited by ‹hypnohsis›, 6 May 2010
"Noelle."he says,his Orange hair glints in the famillliar sunlight I'd been used to for
the seventeen years of my life. I opened my eyes and sat up.Crap! I thought,
realising that him and I fell asleep out here last night before getting home. I stand up
and slip backwards,feeling his warm hand catch me. I mean,we were best friends, so was
this wierd that we sometimes snuck out and talked late at night and ended up falling
asleep?Yes! my self counsious side screamed at me, but I just shrugged the voice
off.Than I looked down to see what I was wearing.A light brown tank and sone white shorts,
that have actually stayed white despite sleeping in the grass every few nights. I slipped
on my boots and yanked up some jeans over the shorts. After this, I put on my yellow
T-shirt. I looked up to find him watching me, a grin plasterd across his face. I rolled my
eyes and asked,"What?" all he did was shrug.My cheeks turned to the peach pink shade they
always did around him and I couldn't help but grin aswel.

5 May 2010, 05:06 PM   #2
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12 views and no commments?Please give crits!

5 May 2010, 07:12 PM   #3
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Posts: 669
Its good. 

Just a few spelling mistakes.

As Well

That's all I found, but I think there might be more.

5 May 2010, 10:55 PM   #4
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I like it so far.
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6 May 2010, 05:14 PM   #5
Joined: 14 Mar 2010
Posts: 155
Oh.Heheh, I couldn't decide between seventeen or sixteen, so my siter aid to leave it
like that and that she'd remind me to change it.She forgot to remind me.

6 May 2010, 07:56 PM   #6
Joined: 11 Apr 2010
Posts: 8
you should write more

6 May 2010, 07:57 PM    #7
Joined: 9 Jun 2008
Posts: 669

Ugh, I think it would be better if she is seventeen, but its up to you.

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