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21 April 2010, 01:30 AM   #1
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They come from a whole other world

"It's, like, another galaxy!"


They view things differently than us

"This-this doesn't make any sense."


They never knew we exsisted

"There isn't anything out there...is there?"


Untill now.

"Takeoff in three....two....one...and WeLSurvive is a
go!



Welcome

"This is impossible!"

to

"But this...this is..."

Moraa.



"It's happening." "What is?" "We're leaving." "We are? Where are we
going?" "Somewhere out there." "What's out there?" "....Earth."
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21 April 2010, 01:43 AM   #2
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Interesting...I still have like no idea and I am totally confused.

Well, I would say more but I gotta go to the bathroom and get ready for bed.

Did I say too much?

Oh, well.

:D

21 April 2010, 09:35 PM   #3
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Lol. I tried to make it seem like a movie preview. The italisized words are telling about
the story and the small boldfaced words are people in the story. It's supposed to be
mysterious...:D
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21 April 2010, 09:54 PM   #4
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OMG!!

Now, I can just picture it in my head now just like that.

Well, I wish you good luck on it.

21 April 2010, 11:36 PM   #5
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Lol thanks. (Btw, i hope you don't mind- I changed the signature thing with all my
stories/poems and stuff.)
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21 April 2010, 11:42 PM   #6
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I totally don't mind.

I would have updated it for you, but my laptop got taken away, and that's where I have my
GIMP on.

Plus, it doesn't look too bad.

As you can see I have to update mine, too.

22 April 2010, 12:29 AM   #7
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Prologue

Dear Diary,

This. Is. Stupid. I mean, no offense, but what's the point of keeping a diary? The Obsters
say it's only for "a few special people" who have been "chosen" for this "special mission"
and that we have to keep track of any ''sightings" that we find.And yet, they don't even
tell us what this special mission is, let alone what's it for.

To them, I say, go to Reyha.

I don't care about this stupid misson. Why does everyone care so much about what's 'out
there'? What's so special about it? Why are we suddenly concerned about it? What is 'it'
anyway? Some people, mostly all the old people, say we're just sending ourselves right off
into a black hole, never to be seen again. I've heard Mawmaw and Pawpaw late at night,
whispering about some other galaxy that might come and invade our planet. They say there's
this planet in the other galaxy that also has life on it, that the scientists just
discovered us and want to "investigate" to see if there are any "life forms". All the kids
say it's nothing to worry about. I agree with them. I mean, there isn't anything out
there...is there?

Now, the Head is calling, and that stupid, braniac girl, Malelsky is tapping my shoulder
and telling me to hurry up and come. She's so annoying... Anyway, i have to go. So sad but
true; I must put you away. 

Sincerely, Aramehgano


Dear Diary,

The Obsters gave me this diary because I have to write my observings in it. In case you're
wondering, I, along with a few others, have been chosen to venture out to this other
galaxy. Our mission is to see if there are any planets that have any signs of life on
them. If there are, we will alert the scientists, who will come and go to that planet. I
do not know what they will do after that. I am still not even sure WHY we're doing this
anyway. I have heard my mawmaw and pawpaw and grandmaw and grandpaw talking. They say that
we have been threatened, or something like that. I don't understand why this is such a big
deal; after all, the planet that supposedly "threatened us" is in a whole other galaxy,
right? So how did they find us, anyway? OUR scientists have been searing for decades for
signs of life, for other planets, for other galaxies...how have we missed this one?

I cannot write any more, the Head is calling. He wants to talk to us all, aparently. I
just hope I don't have to sit next to that dark, moody girl, Aramehgano, again. She's so
tempermental; I think she hates me. The others don't even pay any attention to me...I
finally have something in common with other people, and I still do not fit it.

Yours truly, Malelsky
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22 April 2010, 12:36 AM   #8
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Interesting...very interesting.

Keep writing!

Ugh...didn't really notice anything wrong with grammar...ect...

22 April 2010, 11:00 PM   #9
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 So far, amazing!

23 April 2010, 09:34 PM   #10
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Thanks guys!
Chapter 1

Aramehgano

"I hate you!" i screamed as I ran out the door. I was getting ready for school and I
was argueing with my mawmaw. I wanted to get black streaks in my hair, but she
wouldn't let me, saying I'd be the perfect target for Rey and go to reyha where "all
the other bad kids are". Really, I don't know why she got so worked up. It's just
hair!

So right before I left, my mawmaw yelled at me to come home as soon as school was
over and to not, not not, absolutely NOT go to the hair salon and dye my hair. I ran
all the way to school, where Kapnol and her gang were standing on the playground,
ready to make fun of me. Again. Kapnol thinks she's so cool, just because she's
popular. She always makes fun of me and calls me polarkt, or pol. But it's not just
her; other people have called me stupid names. The worst is The Cutter, because
people think i'm depressed or something so i cut myself. but I DON'T. i think that's
disgusting.

The main thing is, my day did not start out great.

In third period, there came an announcement on the Calling system: "Please excuse us
for the interuption, but we ask that all students be sent home immediantly. All
students, please go home immediantly. Teachers, check your c-notes; there will be an
explanation in there. Thank you." The voice of the principle was still hanging in the
air. For what felt like an eternity, nobody moved. Then everyone got up and grabbed
their backbags and papers and ran out the door. Everyone was talking at once,
wondering what was going on.

When i got home, I was surprised to find Mawmaw in the kitchen. Usually she's left
for work by 10:45, but today she was sitting at the table, looking really worried.
Suddenly, my pawpaw came in the room. This surprised me too, he doesn't come home
from work until 9:00 at night.

"What's wrong?" I asked, throwing my backbag on the floor.

"Honey...they didn't tell you at school?" my maw glanced at my paw.

"No, the principle just told us over the calling system to go home." I shook my
head. "What's going on? Is everything all right? Are there burglars in the town?" 

"No. Sweetie, we're not positive, but there's a rocket in space and...well, nobody
knows where it came from."

"What do you mean? What does that have to do with anything?" I was getting
confused.

"It's not from...here." Maw seemed to be finding it hard to explain.

"Here? You mean, our country?"

Paw suddenly interrupted. "No, we mean that the rocket is not from ANY country. In
the whole world. It's not from this planet at all. Apparently, it's been there for a
few months and during that time all the Obsters from all the countries have been
contacting the other Obsters, trying to find out where the rocket came from. Nobody
knows, so we have concluded that it's not from our planet."

I shifted from foot to foot. "But...the scientist people have been to space so many
times! How could they miss a planet out there that has life on it?"

"there's so much stuff out there, sweetie. It's easy to miss things." Maw said. " I
know it's scary, but we have to just sit tight for a while and see what
happens."

Malelsky

"Wimp!" "Nerd!" "Dumbaye!" All the kids were throwing and pushing and shoving me
around like a ball, mocking me and laughing at me. This was Kapnol and her gang, the
meanest people in the whole school. They hate me, apparently.

"Come one! Why don't you save yourself? Or are you too afraid?" jeered Ryara, a
tall, gangly boy who found joy in putting others down. Kapnol stood by, watching all
of this with a dirty smile on her face. She was a monster, practically ruling the
school. She made fun of anyone who was different than her.

Suddenly, kapnol yelled, "All right, guys, the Pole Dancer'll be here soon, get into
position!" Ah. Aramehgano. Also known as the Pole Dancer-just a few of her many bad
nicknames-because of something to do with mini skirts and a showing developed chest
in the fifth grade. Safe, I ran inside.

My day went by pretty uneventuful. However, in third period, which was science class, our
school principle came on the calling system with an announcement. "Please excuse this
interruption, but all students must go home immediantly. Teachers, check your c-notes for
information. Thank you." 

All the kids got up right away, their backbags not even fully on their backs and papers
flying out their hands. Kids LOVE it when school is cancelled, and nobody (except the
teacher) seemed concerned.

I slowly walked home. It takes about 15 minutes to get there, depending on if I go the
fast way or the slow way. If I went the fast way, I'd turn right from the school and head
to Main Street where all the stores are. I'd go straight for about 10 minutes, then turn
left again and I'd be on my street. If i went the slow way, I'd turn left instead of right
by the school, walk untill I get to the corner that's about 5 yards away, turn right, go
down the hill, past a whole block of houses, turn right again and go by the park, turn
right and go straight for about 20 mintues, then turn right for the last time and I'd be
home. I usually go the slow way, but sometimes Kapnol and her gang follow me so I go the
fast way in order to get away from them. Either way, today I took the fast way.

When I got home, I took of my shoes and placed them neatly on the floor and gently set my
backbag on the floor by a chair. 

"Mawesky! Mawesky!" chanted my little sister Bettricula, who's too young to go to school,
as she jumped up and ran into my arms. She can't say my name the right way yet.

"Hey, Sweetie," I crooned and I rocked her. "Who's a cute baby?"

"Not me!" declared Bettricula.

"What? What's this? You're not cute?!" I pretended to be shocked.

"Nonononono! Me's cute but me's no baby!" said Bettricula. I started tickling her and she
sqealed.

"Malelsky, could you come in here please?" I heard my mawmaw call from the relax room.

Everyone in my family was in the relax room.   Mawmaw, Pawpaw, Grandpaw, Grandmaw,
Great-Auntie Kolarmnay, and my baby brother Mabnay who's only 8 months old. 

"What's going on?" I asked.

"Don't they tell you anything at that Rey-run school of yours?" asked my grandpaw. He's a
gruff old man who highly dissaproves of my school. He uses terrible language, but I love
him. He's the only one who understands how bad it really is for me at school.

"Pawpaw Marmel!" exclaimed Pawpaw. "Don't use those words around the kids!"

"Aw, they don't understand it anyways," muttered Grandpaw.

"Anyway," Mawmaw interrupted loudly, "They didn't say why the students were sent home
early?" I shook my head.

"Well, apparently, there is a rocket out in space, and none of the space programs in any
of the countries have sent it up there. The Obsters have teamed up with each other, and
with a few scientists to try to find out where the rocket came from. They've even tried to
see if there are any secret space programs anywhere, but there are none. Now the Obsters
are afraid that the rocket is not even from our planet, and have ordered that everyone
stay home for a few days while they investigate some more."

"I-I still don't understand! Why is this so bad?" I asked.

"Because, girl!" exclaimed Grandpaw, "There could be living organisms on that rocket from
some other planet or even another galaxy, and they could be dangerous. Why, they might
even try to invade our planet!"
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23 April 2010, 09:42 PM   #11
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Its good so far.

I didn't finish reading (so sorry), because I am busy tonight.

Don't worry I will finish reading it like Sunday.

Uh...make sure you capitalize I. I think that's just a typo.

24 April 2010, 05:26 PM   #12
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'Kay thanks!
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24 April 2010, 06:36 PM    #13
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This seems rather interesting. :D



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