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WRITING: Poetry: Brothers


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14 July 2009, 09:29 PM   #1
Joined: 29 Jun 2009
Posts: 28
~*Guys, I'm sorry for taking up all this space with all the poems, really, they just come
to me. =D This one's has a bit more sentimental value to me. My brothers are awesome.*~


My friends
Long known and just met
Are important in their own way
They mean something to me
To us
To everyone
But they just can't understand
Why I might rather be with siblings
Than them
So I take this moment to explain
Just what my brothers mean to me
To shed some light
On what I think.

I think baseball and sports
Friends and fun
Laughing games
Kind to everyone
My bragging right
Shining so bright
Who could this be?
But my youngest-older brother to me?

I think...
Funniest of all
Having a ball
Smart and intelligent
Though I think that's the same sentiment
Coaching me on life
To be the best I can be
Who but my middle brother to me?

I think far away
But caring still so much
A big bear hug
A conversation
On things that perplex
A different view
And though we're so far apart
In age
In distance
I still hold a close place in my heart
For my oldest brother to me.

All three
Are the best
Forget the rest
Do you not see?
Cannot, will not hear me?
Must I speak more plainly?
Fine then.
I love my brothers
And they love me.
I need a hope
I need a light
Something to look to
In the arctic night
Where beauty abounds
In everything
There, my friends, is what I need

15 July 2009, 12:32 AM   #2
Joined: 2 Jul 2009
Posts: 26
AWESOME>>

DA FIRST IS T>

DA SECOND IS JE>

DA THIRD IS JO

Am I right?

16 July 2009, 05:38 PM    #3
Joined: 29 Jun 2009
Posts: 28
1 is T
2 is Jo
3 is Je

Jo is 25 & Je is 33, yehyita
I need a hope
I need a light
Something to look to
In the arctic night
Where beauty abounds
In everything
There, my friends, is what I need



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