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19 June 2009, 01:28 PM   #1
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Competition time??


OK it HAS to be a poem
about peace

Not about a peaceful setting but about WHY we  need peace
and maybe what its like without it?

Winner gets 6 Kp

Deadline is July First,

Message it to me
or maybe post it on here

Anyquestions? : O

Feel free to message me and ask :D


19 June 2009, 01:46 PM   #2
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OKay Editt, 

I need to add an update to that

minimum of 120 words <3

19 June 2009, 01:46 PM   #3
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or maybe just 100 ;D

21 June 2009, 02:01 AM   #4
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Thank you for your idea, Kyle. I greatly appreciate your enthusiasm.

21 June 2009, 02:43 AM   #5
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Last edited by ‹Maria   ;♥›, 21 June 2009
My Poem. 

I hope it's okay. c:

The sunset bathes in the mellow sea,
With the moon that shares the light,
As flocks of birds fly free,
This is the rebirth of the night.

Wolves howling over the illuminated crescent moon,
As it's painted across the sky,
The crickets chirp the melody of the tune,
And the stars stitched up high.

The sun does arise,
And the daylight sends reaping power,
And as the world opens up their eyes,
The blooming bud turns into a scarlet flower.

Now as you go ponder in this world,
Hold onto earths embrace,
As the truth is uncurled,
And remember to always save the moments grace,
When in peace.

21 June 2009, 02:52 AM   #6
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That was beautiful.
I tear'd at the last stanza.

21 June 2009, 02:59 AM   #7
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Thankyou. :]

Nono don't cry ;-;

21 June 2009, 03:05 AM   #8
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oh gods 

Its beautifull

21 June 2009, 08:18 AM   #9
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Thankyou o3o

21 June 2009, 08:40 AM   #10
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wow that was good 

21 June 2009, 09:53 AM   #11
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Yesh. I just had to comment. :D

21 June 2009, 02:33 PM   #12
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That was such a great poem!!! I loved how described everything included in it ^^

21 June 2009, 04:14 PM   #13
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D :

Some one should give her competition : D

21 June 2009, 08:08 PM   #14
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Of all the things
We need today
prehaps greatest
is just a way
to remember-
We knew at four
about "ther golden rule",
and no one expected more
Then no one being cruel.
When being mean was
bad, not "cool".

If we could do
the same once grown
then prehaps some light
might be shown
on peace, in all it's mystery
For it's a feeling we've all known.

22 June 2009, 08:50 AM    #15
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Nice poem Kirti, I like:
peace, in all it's mystery For it's a feeling we've all known.

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