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4 April 2009, 01:16 PM   #1
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hi guys i'm new here. i wrote this poem hope u like it!! it's called Miracle.


Miracle
 
I'm waiting and watching
For something to happen
Luck is all I need
She comes and goes 
I've never noticed her
Untill now
I wonder
I need luck
I need luck
I need luck
I see the clear blue sky
Now it all makes sense
I finally talked to her
It's something
She told me her name
Miracles happen 
And
Miracle happened.
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10 April 2009, 01:56 PM   #2
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please comment people i want to see what u guys think of my poem!
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10 April 2009, 08:09 PM   #3
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i think its really good.

10 April 2009, 08:46 PM   #4
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thank you!
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10 April 2009, 08:52 PM   #5
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your welcome.

11 April 2009, 11:50 AM   #6
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I like it...........

13 April 2009, 06:01 PM   #7
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thanks! it means alot to me when people like my poems
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13 April 2009, 06:14 PM   #8
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it's amazing!

13 April 2009, 09:54 PM   #9
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thank you! im just so happy right now!
bsure 2 check out my jimmy stories!!
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14 April 2009, 03:57 PM   #10
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HOW LONG DID IT TAKE U 2 WRITE SUCH AN AMAZING POEM

14 April 2009, 04:03 PM   #11
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about 10 minutes i think
maybe shorter
and thanks!
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14 April 2009, 04:45 PM   #12
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your welcome. i made some poems too and i might post some

14 April 2009, 04:50 PM   #13
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u should do that
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14 April 2009, 08:10 PM   #14
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amazin. i can manage about a page or two of a story, but im hopeless at poems lol 

15 April 2009, 01:27 PM    #15
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its not that hard onece you keep tying. i used to be bad at poems 2. then in 5th grade
they just kinda started, well, bein good i guess! if u really want 2 im sure youll get the
hang of it.
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