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[CRIT]Goodbye Forever


21 June 2011, 03:19 AM   #1
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Joined: 12 Jun 2011
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Last edited by ‹hypnohsis›, 21 June 2011
My vision blurred,
    Denial
 My heart seered,
   Betrayal
 I need release.
   Beakout.

  Something holds me back,
  Embarressment?
  Pity  the dead, 
  Love the living. 
  This abnormality burns me.

  My body oblivious,
    Emergency.
 My mind insane,
   Urgency
 My temper's quick,
   Explode.

    Can't stay moral,
    Can't stay awake.
    These wants, these needs,
     Intertwined with sickness.

   My pulse at it's highest,
     Answer me.
  My bones ache with age,
   Release me.
 Bound with mind,
   Inescapable.

   Your a drug,
     Addictive 
   Your a liar,
     Believeable.
    But oh so fake.

    
      Leave forever,
      I want you gone.
      Another stitch to the heart,
      And I'll be fine.
      So I give you my reluctant farewell,
       Goodbye forever.

21 June 2011, 03:29 AM   #2
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Is this a lyrical poem? It looks like a Paramore song. Is it about a dying woman?

21 June 2011, 03:32 AM    #3
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Joined: 12 Jun 2011
Posts: 53
Mackie, nah. It's about my ex. My point of view to her. It is meant ot be lyrical, thanks
for noticing ^^



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