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Mommy's Victim (poem)

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11 June 2011, 03:25 PM   #1
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"Stop!" She cries, Tears streaming down her face. "Mommy stop! Why? Why am I such a disgrace?" Another slap, a bruise on her cheek. She falls to the floor, Never has she felt so weak. Mommy storms out the door, cursing her existence on the way. She lays there crying, Not a word she will say. Daddy won't come home. He left her all alone. She spends the night on the floor, But mommy will come back for more. When the next day comes, Mommy drinks as heavy as can be. The little girl tries to escape, But mommy won't set her free. Mommy throws her against the wall, Her arm is now broken into two. But mommy doesn't care, she screams "I'VE HAD ENOUGH WITH YOU!" Mommy grabs a pan, she throws it at the girl. It hits her as hard as it can. The girl starts to bleed. "Help!" She cries, her heart beating at super sonic speed. Time goes by.. The girl is now dead. Mommy doesn't care. She hides the body under the bed. No one will know, The sad story of the 4 yr. old. Beaten and bruised, Then left to die.

11 June 2011, 04:44 PM   #2
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...thats terrible....its good, but a sad story......

27 June 2011, 10:44 PM   #3
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it so sad.My mom hits me and I can't imagine her doing this.The only thing that can do
this is surely burning in hell

28 June 2011, 02:52 PM   #4
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Thanks, and sadly it's what many kids go through </3

Mhmm. It's so horrible.
And to innocent children who did NOTHING to them?
They're sick in the head :L

28 June 2011, 09:36 PM   #5
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I know.My mom said my granny hit her sometimes so I sorta see it :/

30 June 2011, 01:14 AM   #6
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Thats sad :"(
Hello my name is carrie and i love to wright storys so i have been trying to wright them on here so yeah i hope u love or at lesset like them

30 June 2011, 03:10 PM   #7
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This part really spoke to me:
Her arm is now broken into two. But mommy doesn't care, she screams "I'VE HAD ENOUGH WITH YOU!"
Very lovely. Good job!
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30 June 2011, 08:20 PM   #8
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1 July 2011, 12:49 PM   #9
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@Above: Don't comment if you don't have constructive crits.
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18 December 2011, 01:55 AM   #10
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This is heart breaking. Yesterday a girl did a presentation on child abuse and she showed
the "Concrete Angel" music video, and everybody was about to explode with tears by the end

18 December 2011, 05:31 AM   #11
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Very sad.

Well-written, good job.

18 December 2011, 01:12 PM   #12
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Geeze =C 
I did a presentation on child abuse, and also showed the Concrete Angel music video.
Some people laughed -_-
But that's just because I'm in high school and nobody really cares right now.

Anyhow, this is so sad. 
I'm emotionaly abused, and at times I'm physically abused, but it's my dream now to have
children and give them all the love in the world I can.
I love my family, and that's that hard part. My dad has PTSD from Iraq so it's not really
his fault.
He's also getting better but on my first day of high school his pushed my down the stairs
with our couch cause he was moving out.
It's harder now because when I was little I was used to everything.
Now that he isn't always like that, I never expect it, and it hurts alot more than it used
But like I said, I love my family, and he doesn't hit as often as he did once.
He just yells for hours and calls me names and such.

Anyhow, keep writing, and making child abuse known. =)
Now I feel dumb for ranting about my life O_o

21 December 2011, 04:33 AM    #13
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It was better when you were a kid, because you didn't realize what it was. 

You didn't have the pressure of telling someone try to enter your brain whenever you saw
someone who could help.

You didn't realize it wasn't your fault, so you didn't want to tell anyone.

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