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1 July 2010, 05:22 PM   #1
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I took all of your advice, but it just comes to show that pencil and paper is always
better!~

Once again, it's from my dA, but freshly uploaded. 


1 July 2010, 05:26 PM   #2
The Founder
Joined: 23 Jun 2010
Posts: 95
This looks very good! I also think it's all in the right proportion, too. The only thing
I don't like is head head 'cuz it's so long and narrow. But, that's just me, if that's
your style it's OK then. ^^
SUP.
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1 July 2010, 05:27 PM   #3
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I really like it especially the face and hair!

1 July 2010, 07:15 PM   #4
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I need more comments and stuff!

1 July 2010, 09:47 PM   #5
Emily
Joined: 28 Jun 2010
Posts: 31
I like the hair and the hats a nice touch.
Maybe shading or colouring would make it look better :]

1 July 2010, 10:33 PM   #6
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the body proportions look a bit off and the legs usually have more shape....  but i
really like the head

2 July 2010, 02:01 AM   #7
The Founder
Joined: 23 Jun 2010
Posts: 95
Oh and actually I just realized something.
The arms should be shorter.
Usually the tips of your fingers will reach down to your thighs (?) but on your drawing
they're a little too long.
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2 July 2010, 03:15 AM   #8
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Hey. UMMM. There's a lot to say so...

I just over-lined it.
This is how it should look like if you want it more feasible with correct proportions.

2 July 2010, 03:19 AM   #9
The Founder
Joined: 23 Jun 2010
Posts: 95
(Not to sound mean or anything but) That head looks way better...
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2 July 2010, 12:40 PM   #10
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much better :D you have improved ^^

2 July 2010, 04:55 PM   #11
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Joined: 23 Jun 2010
Posts: 95
Wha....?
I meant YOUR head looked better than Mackie's...
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2 July 2010, 04:56 PM   #12
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Wha....? I meant YOUR head looked better than Mackie's...
Oh. I see. :/

3 July 2010, 03:47 PM    #13
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it looks nice. a lot better than how i draw. lol!



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