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Starr;; Crits on My Pics?


19 September 2009, 09:07 PM   #1
Joined: 9 Aug 2009
Posts: 30

This is my AT with RainyEcstasy. And yes, I know, I spelled her name wrong. *headdesk*
anyway, crit my pic?

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BRS (BlackRockShooter)

No, it's not Miku, it's BRS. =/ Crit my pic?

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AT with Kyun_yo. 
OMFG HIS HEAD IS FUCKING MASSIVE.
excuse my french,
crit my pic?

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uh, I'll make another topic like this if I want more crits on my pics. :DD

19 September 2009, 09:30 PM   #2
Joined: 20 Jul 2009
Posts: 128
Last edited by ‹Jinx Ellise›, 19 September 2009
o my gAWD  ITS BLACK ROCK SHOOTER!!
=D I'ma start with that one, cause i luv her!    better then Miku i think!   
   

BRS
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Goods
- Everything to me looks very acurate, as in i can tell where everything is and i know
what everything is.
(like i can the coat is a coat)
- the bg.
- The eye is cool, as always. 

Bads
- Proubly should be more detial, like shadow and highlights.
-She doesn't have a noes?... O.O can she smell anyway? lol
- When i first saw it i thought u forgot to draw her left leg..
   I don't think it looks good fliped up like that kido..

A for effort. C+ for construction.. D=  5.5/10    (decimal.. lol)

Kyun yo
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Goods
- Nice backround! ^^
- the rose is cute.
- A for chibiness. not so for much for anything else.
- The body looks good.
- hair highlight!

Bads
- The head size is rly getting to me..
- Hair is.. RLY stickish.. 
- the hair highlight looks like lightning..

Chibi is always rly hard to do, i hate doing it.. lol 
 4.8/10


RainEcasty
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Goods
- Hair highlight isn't so bad..
- The bear is cute.
- Hair isn't to stickish.
- Its always nice to have a decorated T-shirt! ^*^
- bg simple but cool.
- Cute smile

Bads
- Grey for the bg isn't to pretty. I think it makes it look dull.
- The lining is rly rly thick, so the eyes are rly bulcky to me.
- WTF no noes lol
- not to much shadow used.

I think i like this one the best ^_^

6/10! 

I hope my critism helped and i wasn't to hard!

Because TRUST ME.
I AM NOT THE ONE TO JUDGE.. AT ALL.. LOL  

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20 September 2009, 05:29 PM   #3
Joined: 9 Aug 2009
Posts: 30
To ‹Jinx Ellise›,

BRS
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I agree, NOT one of my good pictures. I got lazy with the leg and put it up as if she's
running, get it?
I HATE the skin color. Too pale, horrible shding. I can't draw noses. xD Never put a nose
on ONE of my pictures. xD
maybe I should start...

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Kyun_Yo

I like the rose too, but somehow, it doesn't go with the picture. =l
Yeah, it's a cool background, I love the swirly he's standing on! ^^
I HATE HIS HEAD. If I cut it off and put cantalope on the neck and it'll look just the
same. =l
I got lazy with the hair, yeah...

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RainyEcstasy

I always mess up on the hair highlight. =/
Yeah! My favorite is her shirt! ^^
Yeah, grey is too dull, but I tried matching it with her skirt. xD What do you
think would've made a better background color, instead of grey?
Shadow is boring. (xD lame excuse)

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YOUR THE BEST CRITIQUE EVER. 

really.

C: THANKS!

20 September 2009, 07:22 PM    #4
Joined: 20 Jul 2009
Posts: 128
Coolieos! LOL
I'm glad i wasn't to hard!=3
(shadding is lame.. Its as lame as drawing hands... (-__-) I suck at drawing hands..)

Well grey wouldn't be so bad nessecerisly if maybe u would've used on of the textures..
Like having a grey bg and then adding red lepord print on top of it. (i'm telling u to do
that. i'm just giving u an exapmle)

I understand ur noes proubs.
I suck with hands so badly..
They end up like hugly grown bannanas..
But thats why i practice..
(even though i fail most of the time at it.)

**its u in the head with a fan**

NO! LAZYNESS IT UR ENEMY!
DO NOT GIVE IN STARR!
do not go to the DARK SIDE!     


=_= Only if drawing was as easy as MOST rly good drawers make it look and then we wouldn't
even need critics..(because the drawings wouldn't be so bad.)

Hell, we wouldn't even need this club! lol   

- p.s When i practice i don't even upload my drawing.
The new one i just posted wasn't even supposed to go up but it looked so good at the end i
just had to.
^^

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