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WRITING: POETRY: Comments Are Like Tape

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7 May 2009, 04:54 PM   #1
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Last edited by Manderlinaa, 28 June 2009
Comments Are Like Tape

                                   If somebody says something to you i stays on your
                                                 Sometimes the comment is good
                                                             Sometimes its bad
                                             Sometimes it makes you laugh at yourself 
                                        Sometimes it makes you feel bad about yourself
                                                           But always remember
                                   Only you can make good and bad comments stick like
                          But the one that matter dont mind and the ones that mind dont

10 May 2009, 03:24 AM    #2
Joined: 11 Mar 2009
Posts: 212
thats pretty poignant, i liked it, 

are you off-centering those words on purpose?

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